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Fewer science students: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many countries, fewer young people are choosing to study science and engineering at university.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Проблемы

  • Science is seen as difficult and dull
  • Poorly equipped labs and teaching
  • Higher salaries elsewhere

Решения

  • Make science lessons practical and creative
  • Scholarships and career guidance
  • Promote role models and work with industry

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce the decline in science students
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Causes
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Solutions by schools and governments
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with the importance of science for the future

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Образец ответа на band 8

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In many countries, fewer young people are choosing to study science and engineering at university. This essay will discuss the causes of this trend and suggest some solutions.

Several factors explain the decline. Science subjects are often seen as difficult and demanding, requiring more hours of study than many alternatives, so students may choose easier courses with a higher chance of good grades. School lessons can be dull when they emphasise memorising facts instead of experimenting, and a shortage of qualified science teachers and laboratory equipment in many schools makes this worse. Young people may also believe that careers in science are poorly paid or less glamorous than jobs in business, media or technology start-ups, and a lack of visible role models, especially for girls, discourages some from trying. In addition, university fees make students think carefully about which degree will bring the fastest financial return.

To reverse the trend, schools should make science more practical and engaging through experiments, field trips, coding clubs and competitions, and train and retain teachers by offering better salaries. Governments could provide scholarships or reduced fees for science and engineering students and fund science museums and public campaigns showing the exciting work done in the field. Universities and companies can build partnerships to offer internships, mentoring and visits by scientists to schools, so that students see real careers. Finally, promoting diverse role models, such as women engineers, would help to challenge stereotypes and widen participation. Several countries, including South Korea, have encouraged young people with such programmes.

In conclusion, declining interest in science stems from perceived difficulty, uninspiring teaching and doubts about careers, but improved teaching, financial support and visible role models could encourage many more young people to choose scientific subjects.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
STEM subjectsscience, technology, engineering and maths
hands-on learninglearning by doing
career guidanceadvice about jobs
role modelperson to admire and copy
skills shortagelack of trained workers
enrolmentnumber of people joining a course
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