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Crime and unemployment: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many places, crime rates are higher in areas with high unemployment. Why do you think this is the case? What can be done to reduce crime in these areas?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Идеи к вопросу 1

  • no legal income
  • frustration and hopelessness
  • gangs recruit idle young people

Идеи к вопросу 2

  • job creation and training
  • better schools and community services
  • stronger local policing combined with support

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce the link between jobs and crime
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Reasons - poverty, hopelessness, gangs
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Measures - jobs, services, policing
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclusion summarising link and solutions

Напишите на время

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40:00

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Образец ответа на band 8

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In many places, crime rates are higher in areas with high unemployment. This essay will suggest why this is the case and how crime in such areas could be reduced.

The most obvious reason is financial need. People without jobs may struggle to pay for food, rent and their families' needs, and some turn to theft, burglary or drug dealing as a source of income, particularly if legal opportunities seem closed to them. Young men are especially vulnerable, since they are more likely to be unemployed and more easily drawn into gangs. Unemployment also affects people psychologically. Long periods without work can cause frustration, boredom and loss of self-respect, which may lead to alcohol or drug abuse and violence. In addition, areas with few jobs often suffer from poor schools and weak community services, creating a cycle in which criminal behaviour becomes normal. When businesses leave and local shops close, the streets become less supervised, giving criminals more chance to act.

Several measures could help. Governments can encourage investment in deprived areas by offering tax benefits to companies that create local jobs. Vocational training and apprenticeships would give unemployed people skills that employers want, and support in writing applications and attending interviews could improve their chances. Youth programmes, including sports and mentoring, provide constructive activity for young people and positive role models. Improving public services, lighting and policing can restore a sense of safety and community. Some cities, such as Glasgow, have reduced violence by treating it as a public health issue and combining outreach with job opportunities.

In conclusion, poverty, frustration and weak communities explain the link between unemployment and crime. Job creation, training and community investment can reduce crime in affected areas.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
unemploymentstate of having no job
poverty-strickenextremely poor
turn to crimestart committing crimes
job traininglearning skills for work
deprived areadistrict with few resources
economic hardshipdifficult money situation
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