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Crime and unemployment: IELTS essay ideas

Plan this two-part essay about crime with the ideas and outline below, write it on a 40-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many places, crime rates are higher in areas with high unemployment. Why do you think this is the case? What can be done to reduce crime in these areas?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

GoPrep wrote this practice question in the style of the exam. It is not an official IELTS question.

Ideas for both sides

Pick two or three points from one or both columns. You do not need all of them, and your own examples score better than memorised ones.

Ideas for question 1

  • no legal income
  • frustration and hopelessness
  • gangs recruit idle young people

Ideas for question 2

  • job creation and training
  • better schools and community services
  • stronger local policing combined with support

Essay outline

  1. 1IntroductionIntroduce the link between jobs and crime
  2. 2Body paragraph 1Reasons - poverty, hopelessness, gangs
  3. 3Body paragraph 2Measures - jobs, services, policing
  4. 4ConclusionConclusion summarising link and solutions

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Band-8 model answer

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Show model answer (284 words)

In many places, crime rates are higher in areas with high unemployment. This essay will suggest why this is the case and how crime in such areas could be reduced.

The most obvious reason is financial need. People without jobs may struggle to pay for food, rent and their families' needs, and some turn to theft, burglary or drug dealing as a source of income, particularly if legal opportunities seem closed to them. Young men are especially vulnerable, since they are more likely to be unemployed and more easily drawn into gangs. Unemployment also affects people psychologically. Long periods without work can cause frustration, boredom and loss of self-respect, which may lead to alcohol or drug abuse and violence. In addition, areas with few jobs often suffer from poor schools and weak community services, creating a cycle in which criminal behaviour becomes normal. When businesses leave and local shops close, the streets become less supervised, giving criminals more chance to act.

Several measures could help. Governments can encourage investment in deprived areas by offering tax benefits to companies that create local jobs. Vocational training and apprenticeships would give unemployed people skills that employers want, and support in writing applications and attending interviews could improve their chances. Youth programmes, including sports and mentoring, provide constructive activity for young people and positive role models. Improving public services, lighting and policing can restore a sense of safety and community. Some cities, such as Glasgow, have reduced violence by treating it as a public health issue and combining outreach with job opportunities.

In conclusion, poverty, frustration and weak communities explain the link between unemployment and crime. Job creation, training and community investment can reduce crime in affected areas.

Useful vocabulary

PhraseMeaning
unemploymentstate of having no job
poverty-strickenextremely poor
turn to crimestart committing crimes
job traininglearning skills for work
deprived areadistrict with few resources
economic hardshipdifficult money situation

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