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Not reporting crimes: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many communities, people are reluctant to report crimes they have witnessed to the police.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Проблемы

  • fear of revenge
  • distrust of the police
  • belief that nothing will be done

Решения

  • anonymous reporting lines
  • improved police response and transparency
  • witness protection and community outreach

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce the reluctance to report crime
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Causes - fear, distrust, doubt
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Measures - anonymity, trust-building, protection
  4. 4ЗаключениеTrust is key

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Образец ответа на band 8

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In many communities, people are reluctant to report crimes they have witnessed to the police. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and suggest some solutions.

The most important cause is fear. Witnesses worry that criminals, or their associates, will take revenge, particularly in neighbourhoods dominated by gangs where the offenders live nearby. A second cause is lack of trust in the police. If people believe that officers are corrupt, indifferent or discriminatory, or if previous reports led to no action, they see no reason to cooperate. In some communities, there is also a social pressure not to inform on neighbours or relatives, and being seen as an informer can lead to exclusion. Others simply do not want to become involved, since giving evidence may mean losing time from work, attending court repeatedly and being questioned by lawyers. Finally, some people, such as immigrants without legal status, fear that contacting the authorities could create problems for themselves.

Several measures could improve reporting. Anonymous reporting systems, such as telephone hotlines and online forms, allow witnesses to give information without exposing themselves, and the organisation Crimestoppers has used this approach successfully in many countries. Witness protection and strict confidentiality are essential in serious cases. The police must work to build trust through community policing, in which officers get to know residents, treat them respectfully and respond to complaints. Courts can reduce the burden on witnesses by providing flexible hearing times and giving evidence by video link. Public campaigns that explain how reports help to keep the community safe may also change attitudes.

In conclusion, fear, distrust, social pressure and inconvenience prevent people from reporting crime. Anonymity, protection, trusted policing and a more convenient legal process would encourage them to come forward.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
witnessperson who sees a crime
report a crimeinform the police of a crime
fear of reprisalsfear of being harmed in revenge
anonymous tipinformation given without a name
trust in the policeconfidence in the force
bystanderperson who sees but does not act
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