Перейти к инструменту

Herbal vs modern medicine: идеи для эссе IELTS

Продумайте это эссе типа discussion о здоровье по идеям и плану ниже, напишите его на таймере за 40 минут, а потом сравните с образцом ответа на band 8.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that traditional and herbal medicine is better for treating illness. Others think that modern medicine is more effective.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Это тренировочный вопрос в стиле экзамена, его написал GoPrep. Официальным вопросом IELTS он не является.

Идеи для обеих сторон

Возьмите два-три пункта из одной или обеих колонок. Все не нужны, а собственные примеры ценятся выше заученных.

Первая точка зрения

  • Natural remedies have fewer side effects
  • Used for generations in many cultures
  • Treat the whole person, not only symptoms

Вторая точка зрения

  • Modern medicine is tested scientifically
  • It cures serious diseases and saves lives
  • Dosage and safety are regulated

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce both approaches
  2. 2Основной абзац 1The case for traditional medicine
  3. 3Основной абзац 2The case for modern medicine
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with your opinion, e.g. use modern medicine with traditional support

Напишите на время

Первые несколько минут потратьте на план, потом пишите.

40:00

0 слов из минимума 250

Ответ остаётся только на этой странице. Скопируйте его, прежде чем уйти.

Образец ответа на band 8

Сначала напишите свой ответ, потом сравните: как образец отвечает именно на этот вопрос, что делает каждый абзац и какие фразы можно взять себе.

Показать образец (290 слов)

Some people believe that traditional and herbal remedies are the best way to treat illness, whereas others consider modern medicine more effective. I will discuss both views, and I will argue that modern medicine should be the main approach, with traditional methods playing a supporting role.

Supporters of traditional treatments point out that they have been used for centuries and are often cheaper and more accessible, particularly in rural areas where hospitals are far away. Herbal remedies are seen as natural and gentle, with fewer side effects than strong drugs, and practices such as acupuncture or massage can relieve pain and stress. Many patients also appreciate the personal attention and holistic approach of traditional practitioners, who treat the whole person rather than a single symptom. In addition, some modern drugs, including aspirin, were originally derived from plants.

On the other hand, modern medicine is based on rigorous scientific testing. Treatments are tested in clinical trials to check that they work and are safe, and the results have been dramatic: vaccines have wiped out smallpox, antibiotics treat infections that once killed, and surgery can repair organs. Many herbal products have never been properly tested, so their dose and effect can be uncertain, and relying on them for serious conditions such as cancer or diabetes can be fatal. Some traditional remedies may even interact dangerously with prescribed drugs.

In my opinion, patients should rely on modern medicine for serious or life-threatening illness, while traditional therapies can be used alongside it for mild complaints and to improve comfort, as long as doctors are informed. Governments should also fund research to test which traditional treatments are truly effective.

In conclusion, modern medicine is more reliable, but traditional approaches can complement it when used carefully.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
herbal remedymedicine from plants
side effectsunwanted results of a medicine
scientific evidenceproof from research
holistic approachtreating the whole person
conventional medicinestandard modern medicine
effective treatmenttherapy that works
Все бесплатные инструменты

Генератор тем Speaking

Отвечайте на случайные вопросы Part 1, 2 и 3 под таймер, как на экзамене.

Калькулятор общего балла IELTS

Среднее из четырёх баллов по навыкам, округлённое так, как округляет IELTS.

Конвертер баллов IELTS

Сравните балл IELTS с баллами TOEFL, Duolingo и PTE и уровнями CEFR.

Требования вузов к IELTS

Узнайте, какой балл IELTS требует университет, и где это написано.