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Pie chart: Reasons for hospital visits

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The pie charts below show why patients visited a city hospital in 1995 and 2022.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Reasons for hospital visits
Pie chart: Reasons for hospital visits (%). The values are in the data table below.199530%20%28%15%7%202222%24%18%24%12%
  • Accidents
  • Heart disease
  • Infections
  • Cancer
  • Other
Tampilkan tabel data
Reasons for hospital visits
Category19952022
Accidents30%22%
Heart disease20%24%
Infections28%12%
Cancer7%18%
Other15%24%

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  1. 1Overall, hospital visits moved from accidents and infections towards chronic illnesses such as cancer and heart disease.
  2. 2Infections fell from 28% to 12%, and accidents from 30% to 22%.
  3. 3Cancer almost tripled from 7% to 18%, and heart disease rose from 20% to 24%, the largest category along with other.

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The pie charts compare the reasons why patients visited a city hospital in 1995 and 2022.

Overall, the pattern of hospital visits changed considerably. Accidents and infections became less common, while heart disease and, above all, cancer accounted for a larger proportion of patients.

In 1995 accidents were the most frequent reason, at 30%, followed by infections at 28% and heart disease at 20%. Cancer accounted for just 7% of visits, and other causes for 15%. By 2022 the order had changed. Accidents had dropped to 22% and infections had fallen sharply to only 12%, less than half of the 1995 figure.

Cancer showed the most notable increase. Its share climbed from 7% to 18%, more than double, so it was no longer one of the smallest categories. Heart disease also rose, from 20% to 24%, and became the joint largest reason, level with other causes, which had grown from 15% to 24%.

Taken together, accidents and infections accounted for 58% of visits in 1995 but only 34% in 2022.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
reason for visitwhy people attend
infectious diseasesillnesses caused by germs
chronic illnesslong-term disease
almost triplerise to nearly three times
fall sharplydecrease quickly
be the leading causebe the biggest reason

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