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Raising the retirement age: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The retirement age should be raised because people are living longer and healthier lives.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Аргументы «за»

  • Pensions would remain affordable
  • Older workers bring experience
  • Working longer keeps people active

Аргументы «против»

  • Heavy physical jobs become hard with age
  • Young people have fewer openings
  • Everyone deserves rest after decades of work

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеParaphrase and give your stance
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Economic reasons to raise the age
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Fairness and job-type objections
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with a firm position, e.g. flexible retirement

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people believe that the retirement age should be raised because people now live longer and stay healthier. I agree to some extent, although I think flexibility is more important than a fixed higher age.

The economic argument is strong. In many countries the number of pensioners is growing while the number of workers is falling, so the taxes of fewer people must pay for more retirees. Raising the age would reduce the pressure on pension funds and healthcare budgets and keep experienced employees in the workforce, where their skills are valuable. Many older people also want to continue working, as it gives them purpose and social contact. In Germany and Denmark, for instance, the retirement age has been gradually increased to take account of longer life expectancy.

However, a general increase raises fairness issues. People in physically demanding jobs, such as builders or miners, may be unable to continue into their late sixties, and those who started working young have already contributed for decades. Life expectancy also differs between rich and poor, so lower-income workers could enjoy fewer years of retirement than wealthier colleagues. In addition, if older workers stay in post, young people may find it harder to get promotion or their first job, although the evidence for this is mixed.

For these reasons, I believe the best policy is a flexible system. The standard age could rise slowly, but workers in strenuous occupations should be able to retire earlier, while others could choose part-time work, phased retirement or higher pensions in return for working longer. This would respect individual health and circumstances.

In conclusion, raising the retirement age can help to keep pension systems affordable, but a flexible approach would be fairer and more realistic than a single higher limit for everyone.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
retirement ageage at which people stop working
pension fundsavings that pay retirees
life expectancyaverage length of life
working lifeyears spent in employment
skilled workforcetrained workers
flexible retirementchoice about when to stop
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