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Public parks vs housing: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that city governments should spend more on public parks and spaces rather than on housing.

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Преимущества

  • parks improve health and air quality
  • free spaces bring people of all classes together
  • raise the appeal of a district

Недостатки

  • housing shortage remains
  • less land for building affordable homes
  • maintenance is costly

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce the debate on spending on public spaces
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Advantages for health and community
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Disadvantages - housing and costs
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclusion with judgement

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people believe that city governments should spend more on public parks and spaces than on housing. I think the disadvantages of this approach outweigh the advantages, although green spaces are certainly important.

The advantages of investing in parks are clear. Green areas improve physical and mental health, giving residents places to exercise, relax and escape the noise of traffic. Trees reduce air pollution and lower summer temperatures, which matters as cities become hotter. Parks also bring communities together, because they provide free spaces where children can play and neighbours can meet, regardless of income. This is particularly valuable for families living in flats without gardens, and cities with famous parks, such as New York's Central Park, enjoy a higher quality of life and attract visitors.

However, the drawbacks of prioritising parks over housing are more serious. In many cities, a shortage of affordable homes forces people to live in overcrowded or unsafe conditions, or to spend most of their income on rent. Homelessness is rising in several countries, and without a secure place to live, people struggle to keep a job, stay healthy and look after their children. Public money is limited, so spending heavily on open space can mean fewer homes are built, driving prices up further. Land for parks is also expensive in central areas, and its use may push housing to the outskirts, increasing commuting and pollution.

A sensible compromise is to combine the two. Planners can require developers to include small parks, green roofs and playgrounds in new housing projects, so that both needs are met.

In conclusion, parks are valuable, but I believe basic housing should come first, since every person needs a safe home before additional public space.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
green spaceopen land with grass and trees
affordable housinghomes people on low income can pay for
urban planningdesigning how a city is laid out
public amenitiesfacilities for everyone to use
quality of lifehow pleasant daily life is
competing prioritiesneeds that cannot all be funded
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