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Celebrity influence on youth: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Famous people have a strong influence on the way young people dress, speak and behave, and this influence is mostly harmful.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Аргументы «за»

  • young people copy unhealthy or reckless lifestyles
  • celebrity culture promotes unrealistic body images
  • fame is presented as the main aim in life

Аргументы «против»

  • many celebrities support charity and education
  • stars can promote positive habits such as sport
  • influence on style is usually harmless

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce celebrity influence and give a position
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Ways the influence can harm - image, values, spending
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Positive examples that limit the claim
  4. 4ЗаключениеPartly agree, mostly harmful

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people say that famous people strongly influence the way young people dress, speak and behave, and that this influence is mostly harmful. I partly agree, but I think the effect depends on the individual celebrity.

It is true that celebrities can set unhealthy examples. Many promote an unrealistic body image through edited photographs, which can lead teenagers to feel dissatisfied with their appearance and, in extreme cases, to develop eating disorders. Others display extravagant lifestyles, encouraging young fans to value expensive possessions and fame above education and hard work. A pop star who is widely reported to take drugs or behave aggressively may make such conduct seem acceptable, and young people, who are still forming their identities, are particularly likely to imitate their idols. Advertising adds to the problem, as celebrities are paid to promote products such as fast food or fashion that fans may not be able to afford.

On the other hand, the influence is not always negative. Many famous people use their position to promote good causes. Footballers who campaign against racism or who donate to charities, and actors who speak about mental health, encourage young followers to be tolerant and to talk about their problems. Successful athletes can show the value of discipline and perseverance, inspiring teenagers to take up sport or study harder. The result depends largely on whom the young person chooses to follow and on the guidance received from parents and teachers.

Rather than blaming celebrities alone, parents and schools should teach young people to think critically about the images they see.

In conclusion, celebrity influence can be harmful when it promotes unrealistic or reckless lifestyles, but it can also be positive, so I agree only partially with the statement.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
role modelperson others try to imitate
peer pressureinfluence from people of the same age
unrealistic expectationshopes that cannot be met in real life
celebrity endorsementa famous person promoting a product
impressionableeasily influenced
have a lasting impact onaffect for a long time
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