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Weak community spirit: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In big cities, many people do not know their neighbours and feel little connection to the local community.

Why do you think this is the case? What can be done to build stronger communities?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Идеи к вопросу 1

  • Busy work schedules and long commutes
  • Anonymity and short-term renting
  • Online entertainment replaces local contact

Идеи к вопросу 2

  • Community events and festivals
  • Shared public spaces and local clubs
  • Neighbourhood groups and volunteering

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce weak community links
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Reasons
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Ways to build community
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with the value of connection

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Показать образец (282 слова)

In large cities, many people do not know their neighbours and feel little connection to their community. This essay will suggest why this has happened and how stronger communities could be built.

Several factors explain the situation. City life is fast and mobile, and residents often live in rented flats for only a year or two, so there is little incentive to form lasting relationships. Long working hours and commutes leave little time or energy for socialising, and people arriving home in the evening usually prefer to rest. The design of buildings also matters: in large apartment blocks, residents pass each other in corridors and lifts without ever speaking, and there are few shared spaces where conversation might start. Technology adds to the problem, since people can now shop, work and entertain themselves online, and they maintain friendships by phone with people far away rather than with those next door.

There are practical ways to rebuild community spirit. Local authorities can create places and occasions for contact, such as community gardens, parks with seating and street festivals. Architects can design housing with shared courtyards or rooftop gardens that encourage residents to meet. Neighbourhood organisations and volunteering projects, such as food banks or clean-up days, give people a common purpose. Individuals can contribute as well, by greeting neighbours, joining local groups and using local shops rather than distant ones. Some cities have launched apps and events that let residents exchange tools or help elderly neighbours with shopping, and these small acts often develop into genuine friendships.

In conclusion, mobility, busy schedules, building design and technology weaken ties in cities. Shared spaces, local events and individual effort can gradually restore a sense of community.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
sense of communityfeeling of belonging
anonymitynot being known
neighbourhoodlocal area
community centreplace for local activities
social cohesionunity in society
civic engagementtaking part in local life
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