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Family care vs care homes: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that families should look after elderly relatives at home. Others believe that professional care homes are a better choice.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

Возьмите два-три пункта из одной или обеих колонок. Все не нужны, а собственные примеры ценятся выше заученных.

Первая точка зрения

  • Family provides love and familiarity
  • Keeps traditions of respect
  • Saves money

Вторая точка зрения

  • Professionals provide skilled care
  • Relieves families' time and stress
  • Safe, social environment

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce both views
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Family care
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Professional care
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with your opinion

Напишите на время

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people believe that families should look after elderly relatives at home, whereas others think that professional care homes are a better choice. I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

Those who prefer family care emphasise emotional wellbeing. Older people usually feel happier and more secure in familiar surroundings, among people who love them, and relatives often understand their habits and preferences better than any stranger. Living with the family helps to avoid the loneliness that some residents of care homes experience,. In many cultures, including in Asia and the Middle East, looking after parents is considered a moral duty and an expression of gratitude.

On the other hand, professional care homes provide skills and facilities that families rarely possess. Trained nurses and carers can manage medical conditions such as dementia, give medication correctly and respond immediately to emergencies at any hour. Care homes also offer activities and the company of people of a similar age. Looking after a frail relative can be exhausting and stressful, particularly for families who work full-time or have children, and carers sometimes sacrifice their careers, health and finances. In such cases, professional care may actually improve family relationships because the time spent together is more relaxed.

In my opinion, the best choice depends on the individual's health and the family's circumstances. Healthy elderly people may prefer to stay with relatives, perhaps supported by visiting nurses or day centres, whereas those with serious medical needs are safer in specialist care. In either case, families should remain closely involved through regular visits.

In conclusion, both options have advantages, and the decision should be made according to the older person's needs and wishes, with the support of family in every situation.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
care homeresidential place for old people
family obligationduty to relatives
full-time carerperson who looks after another all day
emotional supportcomfort given
professional nursingskilled medical care
independent livingmanaging without help
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