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Longer prison sentences: IELTS esse uchun g‘oyalar

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The best way to reduce crime is to introduce longer prison sentences.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Ikki tomon uchun g‘oyalar

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Qo‘shilish uchun dalillar

  • fear of long sentences discourages offenders
  • dangerous criminals are kept off the streets
  • shows that society takes crime seriously

Qo‘shilmaslik uchun dalillar

  • crime is often caused by poverty and lack of education
  • longer sentences do not rehabilitate
  • prisons become overcrowded

Esse rejasi

  1. 1KirishIntroduce the claim and position
  2. 2Asosiy xatboshi 1Limited deterrent effect and costs
  3. 3Asosiy xatboshi 2Root causes and better alternatives
  4. 4XulosaDisagree that longer sentences are the best way

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Band 8 namunaviy javob

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Namunaviy javobni ko‘rsatish (293 so‘z)

Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to introduce longer prison sentences. I disagree with this view, because longer sentences alone do not tackle the causes of crime.

There is some logic behind the idea. Offenders who are in prison cannot commit crimes against the public, so long sentences protect society from violent and persistent criminals, at least for a time. The fear of a severe punishment may also discourage some people from breaking the law, and a harsh penalty shows victims that their suffering is taken seriously.

Nevertheless, evidence suggests that the length of a sentence has little influence on crime rates. Most criminals do not expect to be caught, so the severity of the punishment weighs less on them than the chance of arrest. A visible police presence and a high likelihood of detection are therefore far more effective deterrents. Longer sentences are also very expensive, as housing a prisoner costs tens of thousands of pounds a year, and money spent on prisons cannot be used for schools or youth services. Overcrowded prisons may increase violence and reduce the chance of rehabilitation, so prisoners come out angrier and more likely to reoffend. The United States, which has some of the longest sentences in the developed world, also has one of the highest imprisonment rates without a correspondingly low level of crime.

A more effective approach addresses root causes: reducing poverty and unemployment, improving education, treating addiction and offering training to offenders so that they can find work after release. Combined with efficient policing, these measures prevent crime before it happens.

In conclusion, longer sentences have limited impact on crime, and a combination of prevention, effective policing and rehabilitation would work better. I therefore disagree with the statement.

Foydali lug‘at

IboraMa’nosi
tough on crimestrict approach to lawbreaking
root causesbasic reasons behind a problem
overcrowded prisonsjails holding too many inmates
crime ratenumber of crimes in an area
serve a sentencespend time in prison
lenientnot strict

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