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Monitoring employees online: IELTS esse uchun g‘oyalar

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Employers should be allowed to monitor their employees' computer use and online activity during working hours.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Ikki tomon uchun g‘oyalar

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Qo‘shilish uchun dalillar

  • Prevents time-wasting and data leaks
  • Employer owns the equipment
  • Improves productivity

Qo‘shilmaslik uchun dalillar

  • Invades privacy
  • Creates distrust and stress
  • Results matter more than surveillance

Esse rejasi

  1. 1KirishParaphrase and state your view
  2. 2Asosiy xatboshi 1Employers' case
  3. 3Asosiy xatboshi 2Privacy and trust
  4. 4XulosaConclude with a stance

Vaqtga qarab yozing

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40:00

0 so‘z (kamida 250)

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Band 8 namunaviy javob

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Namunaviy javobni ko‘rsatish (271 so‘z)

Some employers use software to monitor their staff's computer use and online activity. I agree that they should be allowed to do so, but only within clear limits.

The main reason is that companies have a legitimate interest in protecting their business. Employees often handle confidential information, such as customer details or financial records, and monitoring can detect data leaks and cyber threats before serious damage occurs. Employers also pay for working time, and software can reveal if staff spend hours on social media or online shopping instead of working. This can help managers to identify problems, to distribute workloads fairly and, in some jobs, to improve safety or customer service. If a bank, for instance, did not monitor its employees' systems, it could not prove compliance with the law.

However, unlimited surveillance would be harmful. Constant observation creates stress, reduces trust and may make staff less creative and productive. Workers have a right to privacy, and checking personal messages or tracking every keystroke goes too far. There is also a risk that data collected about employees could be misused or poorly protected.

For these reasons, monitoring should be permitted only under strict conditions. Employers should inform staff in writing about what is monitored and why, limit the checks to work accounts and security needs, and keep the data safe. Laws, such as the European data protection rules, can require this transparency and give employees the right to challenge excessive surveillance.

In conclusion, employers should be allowed to monitor work-related computer use to protect their business and ensure fairness, as long as the monitoring is proportionate, transparent and respects employees' privacy.

Foydali lug‘at

IboraMa’nosi
employee monitoringwatching workers' activity
workplace privacyprivacy at work
trustconfidence in others
productivity trackingmeasuring output
data securityprotection of data
working hourstime at work

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