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Zoos and endangered species: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

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Write about the following topic:

Zoos and wildlife parks are keeping endangered animals in captivity so that they do not become extinct.

Is this a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Плюсы

  • Breeding programmes save species
  • Education encourages conservation
  • Animals are protected from poachers

Минусы

  • Captivity harms animals' wellbeing
  • Natural habitat protection is more effective
  • Animals may not survive when released

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce zoos and conservation
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Conservation and education benefits
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Welfare and effectiveness concerns
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with a view, e.g. positive only if standards are high

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Zoos and wildlife parks are keeping endangered animals in captivity to prevent their extinction. In my view this is a positive development, but only when zoos meet high standards of welfare and have genuine conservation goals.

The benefits are substantial. Breeding programmes in zoos have rescued several species that had almost vanished in the wild; the Arabian oryx and the California condor, for instance, survive today largely because they were bred in captivity and then released. Zoos also fund research, support protection projects abroad and treat injured animals. Moreover, they educate millions of visitors, especially children, who may develop a lifelong interest in nature and a wish to protect it after seeing animals up close, something that documentaries cannot always achieve.

On the other hand, critics raise legitimate concerns. Many animals, such as elephants and big cats, need large territories, and small enclosures can cause stress, boredom and abnormal behaviour. Only a small proportion of captive animals are ever returned to the wild, and some zoos are accused of focusing on entertainment and profit rather than conservation. There is also an argument that money spent on keeping animals in cages would be better used to protect their natural habitats, which is where the real threat to wildlife lies.

These objections show that zoos should be controlled carefully. Governments and independent inspectors should enforce strict rules on space, diet and enrichment, and zoos should be required to contribute to habitat protection and reintroduction programmes. Those that fail to do so should be closed.

In conclusion, well-run zoos play an important part in preventing extinction and educating the public, so I consider them a positive development, provided that high standards are enforced.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
endangered speciesanimals at risk of dying out
captive breedingbreeding animals in controlled places
extinctioncomplete disappearance of a species
wildlife conservationprotecting wild animals
natural habitatanimals' home in the wild
poachingillegal hunting
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