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Funding young entrepreneurs: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Governments should provide financial support to encourage young people to start their own businesses.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Аргументы «за»

  • New businesses create jobs
  • Young people bring new ideas
  • Funding reduces the risk of failure

Аргументы «против»

  • Many start-ups fail, wasting public money
  • Money may be better spent on education
  • Support may favour well-connected people

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеParaphrase and give a view
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Benefits of supporting young entrepreneurs
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Risks and alternative uses of funds
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude with a position, e.g. targeted support

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people believe that governments should provide financial support to encourage young people to start their own businesses. I agree with this idea to a large extent, although the support must be targeted carefully.

The benefits of such a policy are considerable. New businesses create jobs, introduce innovative products and add to tax revenue, so a successful start-up can boost the whole economy. Young people often have fresh ideas and technical skills, but they lack savings and are considered too risky by banks, so without help many promising projects never begin. Grants, low-interest loans or tax relief can remove this barrier and reduce youth unemployment at the same time. Several countries, including Israel and Singapore, have developed successful start-up sectors partly through government funding and training schemes, and some of these companies have grown into major exporters.

Nevertheless, there are risks. Many new firms fail within a few years, which means that some public money will inevitably be wasted, and young people who borrow heavily may end up in debt. Funds might also be misused or go to projects that would have succeeded anyway, while other worthy areas, such as healthcare and education, receive less. Not everyone has the temperament to run a business, and pressure to become an entrepreneur could lead people away from careers for which they are better suited.

For this reason, support should be well designed. Governments could combine small grants with training in management, mentoring from experienced business owners and access to shared office space. Funding should be given in stages, according to progress, and focused on viable plans.

In conclusion, supporting young entrepreneurs can stimulate innovation and employment, and with careful selection and guidance, the benefits outweigh the risks, so I largely agree with the proposal.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
entrepreneurshipstarting and running businesses
start-up capitalmoney to launch a business
financial incentivemoney reward to encourage
job creationproducing new jobs
small businesscompany with few staff
risk-takingwillingness to face danger
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