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High-rise apartment blocks: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many cities are building more and more high-rise apartment blocks to house their growing populations.

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Преимущества

  • Houses many people on little land
  • Preserves farmland and green areas
  • Services are concentrated and efficient

Недостатки

  • Residents may feel isolated and lack gardens
  • Tall buildings use more energy and resources
  • Overcrowding strains local services

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce vertical living
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Space and efficiency advantages
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Social and environmental disadvantages
  4. 4ЗаключениеConclude on which side is heavier

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Many cities are constructing more and more high-rise apartment blocks to house their growing populations. I believe that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages, although design and planning are crucial.

The key advantage is efficient use of land. In a crowded city, space is limited and expensive, and building upwards allows many more families to be housed on a small plot, which eases housing shortages and may reduce prices. Compact, dense development also shortens journeys to work, shops and schools, so people can walk or use public transport, and this saves energy and reduces emissions. It also protects farmland and green belts around the city from being built on. Cities such as Hong Kong and Singapore have accommodated millions of residents in tall blocks while keeping large areas of countryside untouched.

On the other hand, high-rise living has drawbacks. Residents may feel isolated from neighbours and the community, and families with young children often lack outdoor play space. Lifts and maintenance are costly, and a breakdown or fire is more dangerous in a tall building; poor construction can have tragic consequences, as the Grenfell Tower fire in London showed. Large developments can also overshadow nearby streets, strain local services such as schools and clinics and be built from concrete and steel, which generate a high level of carbon emissions.

These problems are not unavoidable. Good design can provide shared gardens, community rooms, shops and nurseries within or beside blocks, while strict safety regulation and quality inspection can lower the risks. Planners can mix tall buildings with parks and mid-rise housing.

In conclusion, high-rise housing offers a practical response to land shortage and urban growth, and because most of its social and safety drawbacks can be reduced through careful planning, I think the benefits are greater.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
high-rise buildingvery tall block
population densitypeople per area
land shortagetoo little space
sense of communityfeeling of closeness
urban planningdesigning cities
construction costscost of building
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