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Arts vs health spending: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think governments should spend taxes on art, music and museums. Others think the money should be used on health and education.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

Возьмите два-три пункта из одной или обеих колонок. Все не нужны, а собственные примеры ценятся выше заученных.

Первая точка зрения

  • culture shapes national identity
  • arts draw tourists and jobs
  • free access enriches life

Вторая точка зрения

  • hospitals and schools are essential needs
  • resources are limited
  • health and education improve lives directly

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce competing spending priorities
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Value of arts
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Priority of health and education; opinion
  4. 4ЗаключениеBalanced budget with core needs first

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people think governments should use tax money to support art, music and museums, while others believe it should go to health and education. In my opinion, essential services deserve priority, though culture should not be neglected.

Supporters of arts funding point out their value. Museums, orchestras and galleries preserve a nation's heritage and give citizens opportunities to enjoy and learn from creative work. Culture strengthens national identity and attracts tourists, which brings income to local businesses; the museums of Paris and London draw millions of visitors each year. Public support also keeps these institutions accessible, so that not only the rich can enjoy them, and it supports artists who might otherwise be unable to make a living.

However, health and education address basic needs on which everything else depends. A person who cannot get medical treatment may die or become unable to work, and no amount of culture can compensate for this. Hospitals, doctors and medicines are expensive, and public funding is the only way to ensure that poorer people can receive treatment. Education is equally fundamental. It gives young people the skills to find employment, raises the productivity of the economy and reduces poverty and crime in the long term. Where budgets are limited, as in most countries, it is difficult to justify spending on a new concert hall when classrooms are overcrowded or patients wait months for operations.

This does not mean that the arts should receive nothing. Governments can provide modest support and encourage private donations, sponsorship and ticket sales to cover the rest, while making sure that schools include art and music as part of education.

In conclusion, culture enriches society, but health and education are essential and should receive the larger share of public money. I therefore support giving them priority.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
public fundingmoney from government
allocate resourcesdecide how money is divided
essential servicesvital public facilities
cultural institutionsmuseums, theatres and similar bodies
tax revenueincome governments get from taxes
spending prioritiesareas where money is used first
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