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Children's own bedrooms: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Every child should have their own bedroom in order to develop properly.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Аргументы «за»

  • privacy helps concentration and rest
  • own space builds independence
  • less conflict between siblings

Аргументы «против»

  • sharing teaches cooperation
  • not all families can afford more space
  • closeness between siblings grows

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce the idea of private bedrooms
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Benefits of personal space
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Benefits of sharing and affordability
  4. 4ЗаключениеNot essential

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Some people believe that every child should have their own bedroom in order to develop properly. I disagree with this view, because children can develop well in a shared room, and in some cases sharing is beneficial.

Those who support private bedrooms have reasonable arguments. A personal space provides quiet for homework and sleep, and allows children to keep their belongings safe and express their personality through decoration. Teenagers in particular value privacy, and having their own room can help them to feel independent and to deal with emotions away from the family. Poor sleep and constant noise from a sibling may also affect a child's concentration at school.

Nevertheless, I do not think a private room is essential for healthy development. Many generations of children have grown up sharing, and they often have close bonds with their brothers and sisters as a result. Sharing a room teaches children to negotiate, compromise and consider others' needs, skills that are valuable at school and at work. It also reduces loneliness and fear at night, since young children often feel safer with a sibling nearby. Furthermore, it is unrealistic to insist on separate rooms for every child. In large cities, housing is expensive, and families on low incomes could not afford a larger home. Suggesting that these children will not develop properly is both unfair and untrue, because their wellbeing depends far more on affection, education and stable family life than on the number of rooms.

Parents can ensure fairness by allowing each child a personal shelf or corner and a quiet time for study.

In conclusion, while private bedrooms offer comfort and privacy, they are not necessary for proper development, and sharing can teach valuable social skills. I therefore disagree with the statement.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
personal spacearea that is only yours
sibling rivalrycompetition between brothers and sisters
learn to compromiseaccept less than you want to agree
a quiet place to studycalm room for homework
crampedtoo small for the people inside
privacybeing free from others' attention
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