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Advertising to children: идеи для эссе IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Advertising aimed at children should be banned, because it encourages unnecessary spending.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Идеи для обеих сторон

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Аргументы «за»

  • children cannot tell persuasion from fact
  • pressure on parents to buy
  • promotes unhealthy products

Аргументы «против»

  • parents decide purchases
  • ads fund children's programmes
  • children should learn to evaluate ads

План эссе

  1. 1ВведениеIntroduce child-targeted ads
  2. 2Основной абзац 1Reasons for a ban
  3. 3Основной абзац 2Counter arguments
  4. 4ЗаключениеAgree with strict limits

Напишите на время

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Образец ответа на band 8

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Many parents and campaigners believe that advertisements directed at children should be prohibited because they encourage needless spending. I agree with this view to a considerable extent, particularly regarding young children.

The strongest argument for a ban is that children are not yet able to understand persuasion. A seven-year-old cannot easily tell the difference between an entertaining cartoon and a commercial designed to sell a toy, and so accepts whatever the advert claims. Companies exploit this by using bright colours, famous characters and catchy songs. As a result, children repeatedly demand products and parents feel pressured to give in, even when money is short. Another concern is health. A large proportion of the products advertised during children's programmes are sweets, fizzy drinks and fast food, which contribute to obesity. Sweden and Norway already restrict child-directed marketing for these reasons.

Those who disagree with a total ban make some fair points. They say that parents are the ones who make purchases and should be able to say no, and that children must eventually learn to assess advertising for themselves. Moreover, commercials fund many children's channels, so removing them could reduce the amount of quality programming available.

Nevertheless, I do not find these arguments convincing for the youngest age group. Saying no to a persistent child every day is exhausting, and media education cannot be effective before a certain age. Broadcasters can find other ways to finance programmes, such as public funding or sponsorship that does not feature products.

In conclusion, I believe advertising aimed at young children should be banned, with lighter rules for teenagers, who are better able to think critically about what they see.

Полезная лексика

ФразаЗначение
persuasive techniquesmethods used to convince
pester powerchildren's pressure on parents to buy
consumer culturesociety focused on buying
targetaim at
unnecessary purchasesbuying things not needed
vulnerable audiencegroup easily harmed
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