Plan this discussion essay about work with the ideas and outline below, write it on a 40-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.
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Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary. Others think that earning a lot of money is the most important factor when choosing a job.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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When choosing a career, some people believe that enjoying the work matters more than earning a lot, while others consider a high income the priority. I will examine both views and explain why I think satisfaction is ultimately more important.
Those who value job satisfaction argue that people spend a large share of their lives at work, so a role that feels meaningful makes daily life happier and healthier. Employees who enjoy their tasks are more motivated and less likely to suffer from stress or burnout. A teacher or nurse, for example, may earn a modest salary but gain a strong sense of purpose from helping others. Money alone can leave people feeling empty if they dislike their job, and research suggests that after a certain point extra income adds little to overall happiness.
On the other hand, supporters of a high salary make a practical case. Money pays for housing, food, education and healthcare, and it provides security in an uncertain world. A well-paid person can save for retirement, support relatives and enjoy hobbies and travel outside working hours. For those who are in debt or who support a family, financial stability is a necessity rather than a luxury, and it would be unrealistic to ask them to prioritise personal fulfilment.
In my opinion, a reasonable income is essential, but once basic needs are met, satisfaction should take priority. A person who is committed to their work often develops skills and a reputation that eventually lead to better pay as well. In contrast, someone who takes a hated job purely for money may soon become exhausted and unproductive.
In conclusion, both factors matter, but I believe that enjoyment and purpose bring greater long-term benefits than salary alone.
| Phrase | Meaning |
|---|---|
| job satisfaction | how happy someone is with their work |
| financial security | stable income and savings |
| career prospects | chances of advancement |
| remuneration | pay for work |
| burnout | exhaustion from overwork |
| fulfilling career | work that gives a sense of purpose |
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