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Job satisfaction vs salary: ide esai IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

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Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary. Others think that earning a lot of money is the most important factor when choosing a job.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Ide untuk kedua sisi

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Pandangan pertama

  • Enjoyable work improves wellbeing and performance
  • Money alone does not bring happiness
  • Satisfied workers stay longer in a role

Pandangan kedua

  • High pay provides security and opportunities
  • Money supports family and housing
  • Interest can develop after a stable income

Kerangka esai

  1. 1PendahuluanIntroduce both views and give your opinion
  2. 2Paragraf isi 1Arguments for satisfaction over salary
  3. 3Paragraf isi 2Arguments for salary as the priority
  4. 4KesimpulanConclude with your opinion, e.g. satisfaction matters more once basic needs are met

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Tampilkan contoh jawaban (288 kata)

When choosing a career, some people believe that enjoying the work matters more than earning a lot, while others consider a high income the priority. I will examine both views and explain why I think satisfaction is ultimately more important.

Those who value job satisfaction argue that people spend a large share of their lives at work, so a role that feels meaningful makes daily life happier and healthier. Employees who enjoy their tasks are more motivated and less likely to suffer from stress or burnout. A teacher or nurse, for example, may earn a modest salary but gain a strong sense of purpose from helping others. Money alone can leave people feeling empty if they dislike their job, and research suggests that after a certain point extra income adds little to overall happiness.

On the other hand, supporters of a high salary make a practical case. Money pays for housing, food, education and healthcare, and it provides security in an uncertain world. A well-paid person can save for retirement, support relatives and enjoy hobbies and travel outside working hours. For those who are in debt or who support a family, financial stability is a necessity rather than a luxury, and it would be unrealistic to ask them to prioritise personal fulfilment.

In my opinion, a reasonable income is essential, but once basic needs are met, satisfaction should take priority. A person who is committed to their work often develops skills and a reputation that eventually lead to better pay as well. In contrast, someone who takes a hated job purely for money may soon become exhausted and unproductive.

In conclusion, both factors matter, but I believe that enjoyment and purpose bring greater long-term benefits than salary alone.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
job satisfactionhow happy someone is with their work
financial securitystable income and savings
career prospectschances of advancement
remunerationpay for work
burnoutexhaustion from overwork
fulfilling careerwork that gives a sense of purpose

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