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Line graph: Births and deaths per 1,000 people

Pick out the main features of this line graph for your overview, write your report on a 20-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of births and deaths per thousand people in one country between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Births and deaths per 1,000 people
Line graph: Births and deaths per 1,000 people. The values are in the data table below.per 1,0000102030401950196019701980199020002010
  • Birth rate
  • Death rate
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Births and deaths per 1,000 people (per 1,000)
CategoryBirth rateDeath rate
19503822
19603515
19703011
1980249
1990198
2000159
20101210

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What your overview should say

An overview names the main trends or differences in one or two sentences, without numbers. These are the features a strong answer picks out:

  1. 1Overall, the birth rate fell steadily throughout the period, while the death rate fell sharply and then began to rise slightly, so the two figures almost converged.
  2. 2Births dropped from 38 per thousand in 1950 to 12 in 2010, whereas deaths fell from 22 to a low of 8 in 1990.
  3. 3Deaths then edged up to 10, leaving the gap between the two rates much smaller at the end than the 16-point gap in 1950.

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Band-8 model answer

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The line graph shows the birth rate and death rate, per thousand people, in one country between 1950 and 2010.

Overall, the birth rate fell steadily over the whole period, while the death rate dropped sharply at first and then rose slightly. As a result, the gap between the two rates narrowed dramatically.

In 1950 the birth rate stood at 38 per thousand, far above the death rate of 22. The birth rate then decreased consistently, to 35 in 1960, 30 in 1970 and 24 in 1980. The decline continued after that, with figures of 19 in 1990 and 15 in 2000, and it reached its lowest point of 12 per thousand in 2010, about a third of its starting level.

The death rate fell much more quickly during the first two decades, from 22 to 15 in 1960 and 11 in 1970. It continued to drop more slowly to 9 in 1980 and reached its minimum of 8 per thousand in 1990. From then on it began to creep upwards, to 9 in 2000 and 10 in 2010. By the end of the period the birth rate exceeded the death rate by only 2 per thousand.

Useful vocabulary

PhraseMeaning
birth ratethe number of births per 1,000 people
death ratethe number of deaths per 1,000 people
fall dramaticallydecrease by a large amount
reach a low ofhit the lowest point
edge uprise slightly
the gap narrowedthe difference shrank

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