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Bar chart: Hotel occupancy

Pick out the main features of this bar chart for your overview, write your report on a 20-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows hotel occupancy rates in four months of the year in three cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Hotel occupancy
Bar chart: Hotel occupancy (%). The values are in the data table below.0%20%40%60%80%100%JanuaryAprilJulyOctober
  • Dubai
  • Paris
  • Reykjavik
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Hotel occupancy
CategoryDubaiParisReykjavik
January88%60%45%
April72%82%55%
July48%92%90%
October80%85%52%

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What your overview should say

An overview names the main trends or differences in one or two sentences, without numbers. These are the features a strong answer picks out:

  1. 1Overall, hotel occupancy followed opposite seasonal patterns in Dubai and in Paris and Reykjavik, with Dubai busiest in winter and the other two in summer.
  2. 2Dubai's occupancy fell from 88% in January to a low of 48% in July, whereas Paris peaked at 92% in July.
  3. 3Reykjavik showed the most extreme seasonality, rising from 45% in January to 90% in July.

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Band-8 model answer

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The bar chart compares hotel occupancy rates in Dubai, Paris and Reykjavik in January, April, July and October.

Overall, Dubai's occupancy was highest in winter and lowest in summer, whereas Paris and Reykjavik were busiest in July. Reykjavik showed the greatest seasonal variation.

In Dubai, hotels were 88% full in January, and the rate declined to 72% in April and a low of 48% in July, before recovering to 80% in October. This was the opposite of the pattern in the other two cities.

Paris had relatively high occupancy throughout the year. Its rate rose from 60% in January to 82% in April and reached a peak of 92% in July, the highest figure on the chart. It then stayed high at 85% in October.

Reykjavik began the year with the lowest occupancy of the three cities, at 45% in January, and the rate rose to 55% in April. It then jumped to 90% in July, double the January level, before dropping back to 52% in October. In July, therefore, Reykjavik and Paris had almost identical occupancy rates, while Dubai's was about half of theirs.

Useful vocabulary

PhraseMeaning
occupancy ratepercentage of rooms in use
peak in Julyreach the highest in July
seasonal fluctuationchange by time of year
high seasonbusiest time
fall to a low ofreach the lowest point
by contrastin contrast

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