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Public shaming online: IELTS esse uchun g‘oyalar

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Publicly criticising people online for their mistakes is a good way to change behaviour in society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Ikki tomon uchun g‘oyalar

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Qo‘shilish uchun dalillar

  • fear of exposure discourages bad conduct
  • gives ordinary people a voice against abuse
  • raises awareness quickly

Qo‘shilmaslik uchun dalillar

  • punishment is often out of proportion to the mistake
  • false accusations spread and cannot be undone
  • harms mental health and families

Esse rejasi

  1. 1KirishIntroduce online shaming and take a stance
  2. 2Asosiy xatboshi 1The limited ways it can deter wrongdoing
  3. 3Asosiy xatboshi 2Disproportionate damage and false claims
  4. 4XulosaDisagree, proper channels are better

Vaqtga qarab yozing

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40:00

0 so‘z (kamida 250)

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Band 8 namunaviy javob

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Namunaviy javobni ko‘rsatish (287 so‘z)

Some people believe that publicly criticising others online for their mistakes is a good way to change social behaviour. I disagree with this view, because the practice usually causes more harm than good.

Supporters of online shaming claim that it holds people accountable. Powerful individuals and companies who behave unethically may escape official punishment, and public pressure can force them to apologise or change their policies. A restaurant exposed for mistreating staff, for example, may quickly improve its conduct once customers react. Social media also gives a voice to ordinary people who were previously ignored, and the fear of being named may deter some unacceptable behaviour.

However, the disadvantages are serious. Online criticism is often disproportionate: a single careless remark or a video taken out of context can lead to thousands of abusive messages, loss of employment and even threats to the person's family. There is no fair process in which the accused can explain, and mistakes of fact are common, so innocent people have been wrongly identified and attacked. The punishment rarely fits the offence, and the content may remain searchable for years, long after the individual has learned from the error. Shaming also encourages anger rather than reflection; people who feel humiliated tend to become defensive instead of changing their views. For young people especially, the experience can lead to depression and anxiety.

More constructive alternatives exist. Serious wrongdoing should be reported to the authorities or addressed through formal complaints, while minor errors are better corrected through private, respectful conversation or education. Platforms should also act against harassment.

In conclusion, although online shaming can occasionally expose misconduct, its cruelty, lack of fairness and limited effect on behaviour make it a poor tool for improving society.

Foydali lug‘at

IboraMa’nosi
public shaminghumiliating someone openly
online backlashangry reaction on the internet
go viralspread very quickly online
disproportionatetoo great compared with the cause
due processfair legal procedure
reputational damageharm to how others see you

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