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Multicultural workforces: IELTS essay ideas

Plan this advantages and disadvantages essay about globalisation with the ideas and outline below, write it on a 40-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

More companies employ staff from many different countries.

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

GoPrep wrote this practice question in the style of the exam. It is not an official IELTS question.

Ideas for both sides

Pick two or three points from one or both columns. You do not need all of them, and your own examples score better than memorised ones.

Advantages

  • variety of skills and ideas
  • helps expand into new markets
  • language skills

Disadvantages

  • communication and misunderstandings
  • conflict about customs
  • local workers may feel excluded

Essay outline

  1. 1IntroductionIntroduce diverse workforces
  2. 2Body paragraph 1Advantages
  3. 3Body paragraph 2Disadvantages
  4. 4ConclusionAdvantages outweigh with training

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Band-8 model answer

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Companies in many countries now hire employees from a variety of national backgrounds. In my opinion, the advantages of this practice clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

The first advantage is the range of skills and ideas that people from different backgrounds bring. A team that includes members trained in several education systems tends to approach problems from different angles, which encourages creativity and innovation. Technology firms in particular have found that diverse teams produce better products. A multicultural workforce also helps a company to expand into new markets. Staff who know the language and customs of a country can advise on advertising, negotiate with local partners and avoid mistakes that a purely domestic team might make. Furthermore, colleagues often learn from each other, picking up foreign languages and an awareness of how people live in other places.

There are, however, some disadvantages. Communication can be difficult when employees have different levels of fluency, and misunderstandings may occur because gestures, humour or ways of giving feedback differ between cultures. A manager's direct comment may be considered normal by one person and rude by another. Differences in religious practices or working customs can also lead to conflict if they are not handled sensitively. In some cases, local workers may feel excluded or fear that foreign colleagues are preferred, which damages morale.

Nevertheless, I believe these problems can be solved. Companies can offer language support and training in cultural awareness, set clear communication guidelines and treat all employees fairly, so that everyone feels included. Once such systems are in place, the problems become minor compared with the benefits.

In conclusion, multicultural workforces bring creativity, market knowledge and language skills, and with good management the difficulties they create can be overcome.

Useful vocabulary

PhraseMeaning
diverse workforceworkers from different backgrounds
multicultural teamteam of many cultures
language barrierdifficulty caused by languages
cultural sensitivityawareness of differences
bring fresh ideasadd new thinking
inclusionmaking all feel welcome

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