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Crowded cities: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu şehirlerle ilgili two-part essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Cities in many parts of the world are becoming increasingly crowded.

What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to make cities better places to live?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Bu pratik sorusunu GoPrep sınav tarzında yazdı. Resmi bir IELTS sorusu değildir.

İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

1. soru için fikirler

  • Population growth and migration
  • Concentration of jobs and services
  • Lack of development elsewhere

2. soru için fikirler

  • Improve public transport and housing
  • Develop smaller towns and rural jobs
  • Plan green spaces and services

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce crowded cities
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Reasons
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçConclude with a hopeful note

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

Cevabın yalnızca bu sayfada kalır. Sayfadan çıkmadan önce kopyala.

Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (274 kelime)

Cities around the world are becoming more crowded. This essay will explain the main reasons for this and suggest how urban areas can remain pleasant places to live.

The primary reason is migration from rural areas. Cities offer better jobs, higher wages, hospitals and universities, so millions of people leave villages where farming no longer supports them. Lagos and Dhaka, for instance, grow by hundreds of thousands of residents every year. A second factor is natural population growth: improved healthcare means that more babies survive and people live longer, which swells the number of residents even without migration. Finally, as economies modernise, industry and services concentrate in cities, creating more employment and attracting still more people.

Making crowded cities liveable requires planning in several areas. Housing is the most urgent issue. Governments can encourage the construction of affordable apartments, and build tall residential blocks near workplaces to use land efficiently. Transport also needs attention: efficient metros, buses and cycle lanes reduce congestion and pollution, so residents can move around without owning a car. Green space should be protected, because parks provide room to relax and help to keep cities cool. At the same time, authorities should reduce pressure on large cities by developing smaller towns and rural regions, creating jobs and services there so that people do not feel obliged to move. South Korea has attempted this by relocating government departments away from Seoul.

In conclusion, migration, population growth and the concentration of economic activity explain why cities are overcrowded. With good housing policy, efficient public transport, protected green areas and balanced regional development, cities can remain comfortable places to live despite their size.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
overcrowdingtoo many people in one place
urbanisationgrowth of cities
decentralisationspreading power or activity
satellite townsmaller town near a city
regional developmentimproving areas outside capitals
liveable citycity that is pleasant to live in

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