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24-hour shops and venues: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu şehirlerle ilgili opinion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Shops, restaurants and entertainment venues in cities should be allowed to stay open twenty-four hours a day.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Katılmak için gerekçeler

  • Meets needs of shift workers
  • Boosts the economy and jobs
  • Makes cities livelier and safer through activity

Katılmamak için gerekçeler

  • Noise and disturbance for residents
  • Alcohol-related problems
  • Staff suffer long hours

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişParaphrase and give a position
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Economic and social benefits
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Costs for residents and workers
  4. 4SonuçConclude with a view

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (272 kelime)

Some people believe that shops, restaurants and entertainment venues in cities should be allowed to open twenty-four hours a day. I agree with this idea, provided that sensible controls exist.

The most obvious benefit is convenience. Many people work shifts or study during the day, and for them the ability to buy groceries, eat a meal or visit a pharmacy at midnight is very valuable. A nurse finishing a night shift, for example, can shop on the way home rather than wait for stores to open. Round-the-clock opening also supports the economy. Businesses earn more income, and they need extra staff, which creates jobs, particularly for students and others who prefer flexible hours. Cities with lively night economies, such as Tokyo, Berlin and New York, attract tourists and are often considered more exciting places to live. In addition, a busy city at night can be safer, since well-lit streets with plenty of people discourage crime.

On the other hand, there are drawbacks. Residents who live near bars and clubs may suffer from noise, litter and disturbance, and late-night drinking can lead to fights and public disorder. Employees who work at night often face tiredness and health problems, and may not receive fair pay for unsocial hours.

These concerns can be addressed. Local councils can set noise limits, require licences for venues serving alcohol, and increase late-night public transport. Employers should be obliged to pay a premium for night work and provide safe transport home. With such safeguards, the problems can be controlled.

In conclusion, allowing twenty-four-hour opening offers convenience, jobs and economic growth, and with proper regulation its disadvantages can be managed.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
round-the-clockall day and night
night economybusiness at night
shift workerperson working changing hours
licensing hourslegal opening times
noise complaintprotest about noise
urban nightlifeevening entertainment in cities

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