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Online shopping vs shops: ide esai IELTS

Rencanakan esai advantages and disadvantages tentang teknologi ini dengan ide dan kerangka di bawah, tulis dengan timer 40 menit, lalu bandingkan dengan contoh jawaban band 8.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Online shopping is replacing traditional shops in many towns and cities.

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Kelebihan

  • Convenience and wider choice
  • Often cheaper
  • Saves travel time

Kekurangan

  • Local shops close and streets decline
  • Cannot try goods before buying
  • Delivery packaging and traffic harm the environment

Kerangka esai

  1. 1PendahuluanIntroduce the rise of online shopping
  2. 2Paragraf isi 1Advantages for buyers
  3. 3Paragraf isi 2Disadvantages for towns, workers and environment
  4. 4KesimpulanConclude with your judgement

Tulis dengan batas waktu

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Contoh jawaban band 8

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Tampilkan contoh jawaban (279 kata)

Online shopping is replacing traditional shops in many towns and cities. In my opinion, the disadvantages of this trend are slightly greater than the advantages, although the convenience for customers is undeniable.

For buyers, the benefits are clear. Online stores are open at any hour, offer a far wider range of products than a physical shop can stock and make it easy to compare prices and read reviews. Goods are delivered to the door, which is especially useful for elderly or disabled people, parents of young children and residents of remote areas. Prices are frequently lower because online sellers have fewer expenses such as rent. A person living in a small village can now buy products that were once available only in big cities.

On the other hand, the consequences for towns can be serious. As customers move online, high street shops close, leaving empty premises that make town centres look neglected and reduce footfall for the remaining businesses. Retail workers lose their jobs, and some of the replacement jobs in warehouses and delivery are lower paid and less secure. Communities also lose meeting places, and customers cannot try on clothes or see quality before they buy, leading to many returns. The environmental impact is mixed too: delivery vans add to congestion and emissions, and packaging creates a lot of waste.

To limit the damage, local councils can support independent shops through lower business rates and convert empty units into housing, workspaces or community venues, while retailers can combine online and in-store services.

In conclusion, online shopping offers convenience and choice, but the decline of local shops, jobs and community life means that the drawbacks are slightly more significant.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
e-commercebuying and selling online
high streetmain shopping street
brick-and-mortar storephysical shop
home deliveryitems brought to your door
impulse buyingunplanned purchase
consumer choicerange of options for buyers

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