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Children's internet safety: ide esai IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many children have unrestricted access to the internet and may see harmful content or contact strangers.

What problems does this cause? What measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Ide untuk kedua sisi

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Masalah

  • Parents lack technical knowledge
  • Children have private devices
  • Platforms are not strict about age

Solusi

  • Parental control software
  • Teach online safety in schools
  • Laws forcing age checks

Kerangka esai

  1. 1PendahuluanIntroduce online risks for children
  2. 2Paragraf isi 1Dangers and causes
  3. 3Paragraf isi 2Solutions by parents, schools and companies
  4. 4KesimpulanConclude with shared responsibility

Tulis dengan batas waktu

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Contoh jawaban band 8

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Tampilkan contoh jawaban (276 kata)

Many children now browse the internet with little supervision, which exposes them to harmful material and to strangers with bad intentions. This essay will outline the main problems and suggest practical solutions.

The first problem is exposure to unsuitable content. A child who searches innocently for a video may be shown violence, pornography or extreme diets, and such images can cause fear, confusion or unhealthy ideas about body image. The second is contact with strangers. Online predators often pretend to be young people in order to win a child's trust, and in the worst cases this leads to blackmail or abuse. Even without criminals, excessive unsupervised use can lead to bullying in chat groups, which damages confidence and school performance.

There are several ways to address these dangers. Parents have the greatest influence, and they can install filtering software, set time limits and keep computers in shared rooms rather than bedrooms. More important than technology, however, is an open relationship in which children feel able to say when something upsets them without fear of punishment. Schools can support this by teaching digital literacy from an early age, explaining how to spot fake profiles and why personal details should never be shared. Finally, technology companies and governments must play their part. Platforms could be required to verify ages and to remove harmful material quickly, with substantial fines if they fail. The United Kingdom's online safety legislation is one attempt to do exactly this.

In conclusion, unrestricted internet access puts children at risk of harmful content and dangerous contact. A combination of parental involvement, education in schools and stronger regulation of online companies would greatly reduce these risks.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
parental controlstools limiting what children see
inappropriate contentunsuitable material
online predatorperson who targets children online
age verificationproving age
internet safetystaying safe online
cyber awarenessknowing online risks

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