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Thanks for a birthday gift

Use the greeting, sign-off and paragraph plan below for this semi-formal letter, write it on a 20-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model letter.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

A friend of your parents sent you a generous gift for your birthday.

Write a letter to Mr Nasser, a friend of your family. In your letter

  • thank him for the gift
  • describe how you plan to use it
  • tell him about your birthday celebration

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Mr Nasser,

GoPrep wrote this practice question in the style of the exam. It is not an official IELTS question.

Plan your letter

Start with
Dear Mr Nasser,
End with
Kind regards,

A letter to someone you know but not closely can end Kind regards or Best wishes as well as Yours sincerely, followed by your name.

  1. 1OpeningSay who you are, if needed, and why you are writing.
  2. 2Paragraph 1Thank him for the gift
  3. 3Paragraph 2Describe how you plan to use it
  4. 4Paragraph 3Tell him about your birthday celebration
  5. 5ClosingSay what you would like to happen next, then sign off.

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Band-8 model letter

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Dear Mr Nasser,

Thank you so much for the generous gift that you sent me for my birthday. It was a wonderful surprise, and I was very touched that you remembered me.

I have been thinking carefully about how to use it. As you may know, I have wanted to learn the piano for a long time, but I could not afford a good instrument. With your gift and some of my own savings, I will now be able to buy a second-hand piano, and I have already found one in a shop near my house. I will start lessons next month.

My birthday was a lovely day. My family took me out for dinner at my favourite restaurant, and several friends joined us afterwards, so we stayed out until late. My mother baked an enormous chocolate cake, and we ate it for the rest of the week.

I would be delighted to play something for you when you next visit us, although I promise to practise first!

Thank you again for your kindness.

Kind regards,
Amir Khalil

Key phrases

PhraseMeaning
I just wanted to say thank you forwarm, polite opening
It was extremely kind of you topraise someone's generosity
I really appreciatedsay you valued something
It meant a great deal to me.say something was very important
I'd love to return the favour some time.offer to help in future

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