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Sugar and childhood obesity: أفكار لمقال IELTS

خطّط لمقال problem and solution هذا عن الصحة بالأفكار والمخطط أدناه، واكتبه مع مؤقت 40 دقيقة، ثم قارنه بإجابة نموذجية بمستوى band 8.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Children today eat more sugary and processed foods than previous generations, and childhood obesity is increasing.

What problems does this cause? What measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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أفكار للجانبين

اختر نقطتين أو ثلاثًا من عمود واحد أو من العمودين. لا تحتاج إليها كلها، وأمثلتك الخاصة تحصل على درجة أعلى من الأمثلة المحفوظة.

المشكلات

  • Heavy advertising of unhealthy food
  • Busy parents rely on convenience meals
  • Cheap fast food is everywhere

الحلول

  • Ban junk-food ads aimed at children
  • Healthy school meals and cooking lessons
  • Clear labelling and taxes on sugary products

مخطط المقال

  1. 1المقدمةIntroduce the trend
  2. 2فقرة العرض 1Causes and consequences for children
  3. 3فقرة العرض 2Measures by government, schools and parents
  4. 4الخاتمةConclude with the long-term benefits

اكتب مع المؤقت

خطّط في الدقائق الأولى، ثم اكتب.

40:00

0 كلمة (الحد الأدنى 250)

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إجابة نموذجية بمستوى band 8

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اعرض الإجابة النموذجية (276 كلمة)

Children today consume far more sugary and processed food than earlier generations, and childhood obesity is rising. This essay will discuss the problems this causes and suggest measures to address them.

The trend has several causes and serious consequences. Cheap, heavily advertised snacks and drinks are easy to buy, and busy parents often rely on ready meals. The result is that many children gain excess weight, which raises the risk of type 2 diabetes, heart problems and joint pain at an early age. Poor diets also affect energy and concentration in class, and overweight children may suffer from bullying and low self-esteem, which damages their mental health. Dental decay is another widespread problem. In the long term, a generation of unhealthy adults would place an enormous burden on healthcare budgets.

Several measures could improve the situation. Governments can tax sugary drinks, restrict advertising aimed at children and require clearer labels showing the sugar content of products. Schools can provide nutritious meals, remove vending machines and teach pupils how to cook and why balanced eating matters. Parents have the most direct influence: they can keep fruit and vegetables at home, cook with their children and limit snacks, setting an example through their own habits. Local authorities could make healthy food more affordable and build safe playgrounds, so that children also exercise more. In the United Kingdom, healthier school meal standards introduced in recent years have already improved what many pupils eat each day.

In conclusion, unhealthy diets harm children's physical and emotional wellbeing and create costs for society, but cooperation between governments, schools and families can reverse the trend and give the next generation a healthier future.

مفردات مفيدة

العبارةالمعنى
processed foodfood made industrially
convenience mealsready-made food
nutrition educationteaching about healthy eating
food labellinginformation on packaging
healthy eating habitsgood routines for food
health risksdangers to health

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