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No early release for murder: أفكار لمقال IELTS

خطّط لمقال opinion هذا عن الجريمة بالأفكار والمخطط أدناه، واكتبه مع مؤقت 40 دقيقة، ثم قارنه بإجابة نموذجية بمستوى band 8.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Serious crimes such as murder should always be punished with the longest possible prison sentence, with no chance of early release.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

كتب GoPrep هذا السؤال التدريبي بأسلوب الامتحان. وهو ليس سؤال IELTS رسميًا.

أفكار للجانبين

اختر نقطتين أو ثلاثًا من عمود واحد أو من العمودين. لا تحتاج إليها كلها، وأمثلتك الخاصة تحصل على درجة أعلى من الأمثلة المحفوظة.

أسباب للموافقة

  • protects the public permanently
  • justice for victims' families
  • prevents repeat offences

أسباب للمعارضة

  • people can change and deserve a second chance
  • no hope removes any reason to behave in prison
  • errors in conviction cannot be corrected easily

مخطط المقال

  1. 1المقدمةIntroduce the question of fixed severe sentences
  2. 2فقرة العرض 1Protection and justice
  3. 3فقرة العرض 2Rehabilitation and risk of error
  4. 4الخاتمةPartial agreement with review options

اكتب مع المؤقت

خطّط في الدقائق الأولى، ثم اكتب.

40:00

0 كلمة (الحد الأدنى 250)

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إجابة نموذجية بمستوى band 8

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اعرض الإجابة النموذجية (299 كلمة)

Some people believe that serious crimes such as murder should always be punished with the longest possible sentence and no chance of early release. I disagree with this view, although I accept that the most dangerous offenders must be kept in prison for a very long time.

Those who agree make a powerful argument. Murder causes irreversible harm, and victims' families feel that justice is not served if the killer is released while they still grieve. Long, fixed sentences also protect society, as dangerous people cannot offend again, and they may deter potential criminals. Offering no chance of release gives certainty and prevents mistakes by parole boards, which have occasionally freed prisoners who later killed again.

However, I believe a rule that applies automatically to every serious offender is too rigid. Crimes differ greatly in circumstances: a premeditated killing for money is very different from a death caused in a moment of rage, or by a victim of domestic abuse who fought back. A system that makes no distinction cannot be fair. Without any hope of release, prisoners have no reason to behave well or to take part in education and therapy, which makes prisons more violent and dangerous for staff. Keeping people inside for life is also extremely expensive, especially as they grow old and require healthcare. In addition, the risk of wrongful conviction means that irreversible punishments are troubling; several countries have freed innocent prisoners after many years when new evidence emerged.

A better approach is to impose very long minimum terms for the worst crimes, with release considered only after rigorous assessment, while permanently detaining those who remain a danger.

In conclusion, serious offenders deserve severe punishment, but a blanket ban on early release is too inflexible and potentially unjust, so I disagree with the statement.

مفردات مفيدة

العبارةالمعنى
life imprisonmentprison for the rest of one's life
early releaseleaving prison before the sentence ends
serious offenderperson guilty of grave crimes
miscarriage of justicewrong court decision
retributionpunishment for what was done
second chanceopportunity to start again

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