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Fast food and obesity: أفكار لمقال IELTS

خطّط لمقال problem and solution هذا عن الطعام بالأفكار والمخطط أدناه، واكتبه مع مؤقت 40 دقيقة، ثم قارنه بإجابة نموذجية بمستوى band 8.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Obesity is becoming more common in many countries, partly because people eat large amounts of fast food and processed products.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

كتب GoPrep هذا السؤال التدريبي بأسلوب الامتحان. وهو ليس سؤال IELTS رسميًا.

أفكار للجانبين

اختر نقطتين أو ثلاثًا من عمود واحد أو من العمودين. لا تحتاج إليها كلها، وأمثلتك الخاصة تحصل على درجة أعلى من الأمثلة المحفوظة.

المشكلات

  • cheap, convenient and heavily advertised
  • long working hours leave little time to cook
  • portions are large

الحلول

  • tax on sugary and fatty products
  • nutrition education in schools
  • clear food labels

مخطط المقال

  1. 1المقدمةIntroduce rising obesity
  2. 2فقرة العرض 1Causes
  3. 3فقرة العرض 2Solutions
  4. 4الخاتمةGovernment and individuals

اكتب مع المؤقت

خطّط في الدقائق الأولى، ثم اكتب.

40:00

0 كلمة (الحد الأدنى 250)

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إجابة نموذجية بمستوى band 8

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اعرض الإجابة النموذجية (276 كلمة)

Obesity rates are rising in many countries, and a diet rich in fast food and processed products is often blamed. This essay will look at the causes of the problem and propose some measures to deal with it.

One cause is that unhealthy food is cheap, convenient and heavily advertised. A burger meal costs less than a salad in many places, and television and online advertisements make it appealing, especially to children. Lifestyle is another factor. People who work long hours often have little time or energy to cook, so they rely on ready meals and takeaways. Portion sizes in restaurants and supermarkets have also grown, which encourages people to eat more than they need. Together with a lack of exercise, these habits cause weight gain, and over the years the effects on health become serious.

Several solutions are possible. Governments could introduce taxes on products high in sugar and fat, which would make them more expensive and encourage consumers to choose alternatives; the revenue could subsidise fresh fruit and vegetables. Nutrition education in schools is equally important. If children learn about balanced diets and practise basic cooking, they will be better equipped to make healthy choices as adults and may influence their families. Finally, clear labelling on packaging, such as traffic-light colours showing sugar, salt and fat content, would help shoppers to understand what they are buying. Restrictions on advertising to children, as already applied in some countries, could add further protection.

In conclusion, obesity is caused by the availability and promotion of cheap, unhealthy food combined with busy lifestyles. Taxation, education and better labelling would help people, especially the young, to eat more healthily.

مفردات مفيدة

العبارةالمعنى
processed foodfood changed by industrial methods
balanced dietfood with all necessary nutrients
calorie intakeenergy taken from food
portion sizeamount served
nutrition labelsinformation on packaging
sedentary lifestyleinactive way of living

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