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Overfishing: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu çevreyle ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The world's fish stocks are falling because of overfishing and pollution.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Bu pratik sorusunu GoPrep sınav tarzında yazdı. Resmi bir IELTS sorusu değildir.

İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

Sorunlar

  • Huge commercial fishing fleets
  • Demand for seafood
  • Pollution and warming oceans

Çözümler

  • Fishing quotas and protected zones
  • Support sustainable fisheries and fish farming
  • Reduce pollution and consumer awareness

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce declining fish stocks
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçConclude with long-term benefits

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

Cevabın yalnızca bu sayfada kalır. Sayfadan çıkmadan önce kopyala.

Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (275 kelime)

The world's fish stocks are declining because of overfishing and pollution. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and propose some solutions.

Overfishing is mainly driven by demand and technology. As the global population grows and more people eat fish as a source of protein, the quantity caught has risen. At the same time, huge factory ships equipped with sonar and enormous nets can capture entire shoals, taking fish faster than they can reproduce. Weak regulation worsens the problem, because in international waters it is difficult to enforce catch limits, and illegal fishing is widespread. Pollution adds to the damage. Plastic waste, chemicals from farms and oil spills contaminate the sea, destroying coral reefs and coastal nurseries where young fish develop. Rising ocean temperatures caused by climate change also disturb breeding patterns and push fish into different waters.

A number of measures could help. Governments should set scientifically based quotas and enforce them with satellite tracking and inspections, with heavy penalties for illegal vessels. Marine protected areas, where fishing is prohibited, allow populations to recover and then spread into surrounding waters; this approach has worked well around parts of the Mediterranean. Reducing pollution requires stricter control of industrial waste and farm run-off, together with efforts to cut plastic use. Consumers also have a role: choosing sustainably certified seafood puts pressure on suppliers, while fish farming, if managed properly, can reduce reliance on wild stocks. Finally, international agreements are essential, since fish do not respect national borders.

In conclusion, increasing demand, modern fishing technology, weak enforcement and pollution threaten fish stocks. Firm quotas, protected zones, cleaner seas and responsible consumer choices could restore them.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
overfishingcatching too many fish
fish stocksnumbers of fish in the sea
marine reserveprotected sea area
sustainable fishingcatching without harming supply
aquaculturefish farming
bycatchunwanted catch

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