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Banning dangerous sports: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu sporla ilgili opinion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Dangerous sports such as skydiving and mountain climbing should be banned because they put lives at risk.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

Katılmak için gerekçeler

  • rescues cost money
  • deaths and injuries
  • bad example for youth

Katılmamak için gerekçeler

  • adults may choose risks
  • tourism and jobs
  • thrill and personal growth

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce extreme sports
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Risks
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Freedom of choice
  4. 4SonuçDisagree with a ban but support rules

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (294 kelime)

Sports such as skydiving and mountain climbing carry a serious risk of injury and death, and some argue that they should be prohibited. I disagree with this proposal, although I accept that the risks should be managed.

The case for a ban rests on cost and safety. Rescue operations, which may involve helicopters and teams of professionals, are expensive and are often paid for by taxpayers. They can also put the lives of rescuers in danger. Deaths and injuries cause great suffering to families, and some people believe that high-profile adventurers set a dangerous example for young people, who might try to copy them without proper training.

Nevertheless, I do not think that prohibition is justified. Adults have the right to make decisions about their own lives, and as long as they do not harm others, the state should not interfere. Many everyday activities, from driving a car to playing football, involve risk, and it would be inconsistent to ban only the most spectacular ones. Extreme sports also have benefits. They support tourism and create jobs in regions such as the Alps or New Zealand, where guides, instructors and hotels depend on adventure visitors. Participants often say that the thrill and challenge help them to build confidence, overcome fear and appreciate nature. A ban would probably drive these activities underground, where they would be even less safe.

A better solution is regulation. Authorities can require qualified instructors, licensed equipment and insurance, and climbers in dangerous areas could be asked to pay for their own rescue. This reduces both the risk and the burden on the public purse.

In conclusion, extreme sports are risky, but individual freedom and economic benefits outweigh the arguments for a ban, and strict safety rules are a more sensible response.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
extreme sportsport with a high level of danger
adrenalinehormone giving excitement
risk assessmentstudy of dangers
safety regulationsrules for protection
thrill-seekerperson who enjoys excitement
fatal accidentaccident causing death

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