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Doping in sport: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu sporla ilgili two-part essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The use of banned drugs by athletes to improve performance is a growing problem in professional sport.

Why is this happening? What can be done to address it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Bu pratik sorusunu GoPrep sınav tarzında yazdı. Resmi bir IELTS sorusu değildir.

İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

1. soru için fikirler

  • huge prizes and fame
  • pressure to win
  • new drugs hard to detect

2. soru için fikirler

  • regular random testing
  • lifetime bans and heavy fines
  • education for athletes and coaches

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce doping
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçStrict enforcement

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (281 kelime)

The use of banned substances to improve performance has become a serious problem in professional sport. This essay will explain why athletes dope and suggest ways of tackling the issue.

The most important reason is the scale of the rewards. Winning a major title can bring prize money, sponsorship contracts and lasting fame, so athletes may feel that the potential gain is worth the risk. Pressure also plays a part. Competitors believe that rivals are cheating and fear being left behind if they do not do the same, and coaches, federations or even governments may push them to produce medals. A third factor is that new drugs and methods are developed constantly, and laboratories often take years to find a way of detecting them, which gives dishonest athletes a good chance of avoiding discovery.

Several measures could reduce doping. Firstly, regular, unannounced testing throughout the year, not only at competitions, makes it far harder to schedule drug use around known dates. Samples should be stored for many years and re-tested as technology improves, which has already led to medals being withdrawn long after events. Secondly, punishments need to be severe enough to deter, such as lifetime bans and heavy fines, and officials or doctors who help athletes should be penalised as well. Finally, education is vital. Young athletes and their coaches should understand the health dangers, including heart disease and hormonal damage, and the moral importance of fair play, so that fewer of them are tempted in the first place.

In conclusion, doping persists because of financial rewards, competitive pressure and difficulties in detection. Stronger testing, tougher penalties and better education would protect both the integrity and the health of sport.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
performance-enhancing drugssubstances that improve ability
doping testcheck for banned substances
lifetime bannever allowed to compete again
cheatact dishonestly
level of competitionhow strong the rivals are
integrity of sporthonest and fair character of sport

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