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Team vs individual sports: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu sporla ilgili discussion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that team sports are the best for children, while others think individual sports are better.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Bu pratik sorusunu GoPrep sınav tarzında yazdı. Resmi bir IELTS sorusu değildir.

İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

Birinci görüş

  • teamwork and communication
  • friendship
  • learning to cooperate

İkinci görüş

  • self-discipline and independence
  • personal progress
  • less dependence on others

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce team vs individual sports
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Team sports
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Individual sports; view
  4. 4SonuçA mix is ideal

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

Cevabın yalnızca bu sayfada kalır. Sayfadan çıkmadan önce kopyala.

Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (290 kelime)

Parents often disagree about whether children are better off in team sports or in individual ones. I believe that both have real value, but that team sports are slightly more beneficial for young children.

Supporters of team sports emphasise social development. Playing football or basketball requires children to communicate, share responsibility and work towards a common aim, and they learn to accept different roles and to respect the decisions of others. It also helps to create friendships, since team members spend a great deal of time together, and a child who is shy may gain confidence from being part of a group. The experience of winning and losing together teaches cooperation and resilience, skills that are essential at school and in later working life.

On the other hand, individual sports such as swimming, tennis or gymnastics develop other strengths. A child who competes alone learns self-discipline, because progress depends entirely on his or her own effort and practice. Personal improvement is easy to measure, which can build pride and motivation. Individual athletes also learn to rely on themselves rather than on teammates, and they do not feel the pressure of letting others down. Furthermore, these activities may be preferable for children who dislike competition within a group, or who live in areas where it is hard to form a team.

In my opinion, team sports offer a broader range of social skills at an age when children are still learning how to get along with others, so I would encourage them first. However, the ideal is to let children try both and then decide which one suits their personality.

In conclusion, team sports teach cooperation and friendship, while individual sports teach independence, and children gain most from experiencing a mixture.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
teamworkworking together
solo sportactivity played alone
self-disciplinecontrol of oneself
cooperationworking with others
personal bestyour best performance
individual achievementsuccess by oneself

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