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Young adults and debt: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu ekonomiyle ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many young adults borrow heavily with credit cards and loans and struggle to repay their debts.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

Sorunlar

  • Easy credit and aggressive marketing
  • Lack of financial education
  • Pressure to keep up with others

Çözümler

  • Teach budgeting at school
  • Regulate lending and interest rates
  • Encourage saving and debt counselling

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce young people's debt
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçConclude with the benefits of financial responsibility

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (277 kelime)

A growing number of young adults rely on credit cards and loans and then find themselves unable to repay what they owe. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and propose some solutions.

One cause is the ease with which credit is offered. Banks market cards aggressively to students and new graduates, often with generous limits and little checking of whether the customer can afford repayments. A second cause is lack of financial education. Many school leavers have never learned how interest accumulates, so a small purchase can become a large debt within a year. Social pressure plays a part too. Social media constantly displays holidays, fashion and restaurants, and young people may borrow in order to keep up with their friends. Finally, rising rents and tuition fees combined with low entry-level salaries mean that some young adults use credit simply to cover essentials.

Several measures could help. Schools should include practical money management in the curriculum, teaching pupils to budget, to compare interest rates and to understand the consequences of missed payments. Lenders should be required to assess income carefully before approving credit and to cap interest rates for first-time borrowers, as some European countries have done. Advertising that presents borrowing as costless could also be restricted. At the same time, governments can reduce the pressure to borrow by making housing and education more affordable, and by supporting free debt advice services so that struggling borrowers seek help early instead of ignoring the problem.

In conclusion, easy credit, poor financial knowledge, social pressure and economic hardship all contribute to youth debt. Education, responsible lending rules and affordable basics would help young adults avoid it.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
credit card debtmoney owed on cards
interest ratecost of borrowing
budgeting skillsability to plan spending
overspendspend too much
debt counsellingadvice on repaying debts
financial responsibilitywise handling of money

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