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Brain drain and the economy: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu ekonomiyle ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many highly educated young people leave their home country to work abroad, which harms the national economy.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

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Sorunlar

  • Better pay and conditions abroad
  • Limited career opportunities at home
  • Political or economic instability

Çözümler

  • Improve wages and working conditions at home
  • Invest in research and local industry
  • Offer incentives for returning professionals

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce the brain drain
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçConclude with the benefits for the home country

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (289 kelime)

Every year, many highly educated young people leave their home countries to work overseas, and this is often said to damage the national economy. This essay will explain why people leave and suggest how governments could respond.

The main cause is the gap in pay and opportunity. A doctor or engineer may earn several times more in Germany or Canada than at home, and foreign employers often offer better equipment, research funding and career prospects. Poor working conditions are a second factor: where hospitals are under-resourced or promotions depend on personal connections rather than ability, talented people become frustrated and look elsewhere. Political instability and concerns about safety also push families to emigrate, and once a few relatives have settled abroad, they encourage others to follow. The result is that the country loses the professionals it paid to educate, and sectors such as healthcare may be left with severe shortages.

Governments can take several steps. Improving salaries and working conditions for key professions would make staying more attractive, and investment in research centres and technology parks would create the kind of jobs that graduates currently seek abroad. Some countries require students whose tuition was funded by the state to work locally for a number of years, though this should be combined with incentives rather than used as a penalty. Authorities can also make use of emigrants instead of resenting them. India, for example, encourages its overseas professionals to invest at home, to mentor start-ups and to return later with new experience.

In conclusion, low pay, poor conditions and instability drive skilled workers away. Better pay, investment in modern workplaces and policies that connect with the diaspora would reduce the loss and could even turn it into a long-term advantage.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
brain drainloss of skilled people to other countries
skilled professionalshighly trained workers
emigrateleave one's country
career prospectsjob chances
return migrationcoming back home
talent retentionkeeping skilled people

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