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Children's screen time: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu teknolojiyle ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many children now spend several hours a day on tablets and games consoles instead of playing outdoors or reading.

What problems does this cause? What measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Sorunlar

  • Less physical activity and rising obesity
  • Shorter attention spans and poorer sleep
  • Reduced face-to-face social skills

Çözümler

  • Parents set daily screen-time limits
  • Schools offer more sport and outdoor activities
  • Governments fund safe playgrounds and awareness campaigns

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce the trend and say you will cover problems and solutions
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Health, concentration and social problems
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Measures by parents, schools and governments
  4. 4SonuçConclude that shared responsibility can restore balance

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (275 kelime)

Children today often spend hours on tablets and games consoles rather than playing outside or reading. This essay will examine the problems that result and suggest several practical solutions.

The first problem concerns physical health. Children who sit still for long periods burn fewer calories, and this is linked to obesity, poor posture and disturbed sleep, especially when screens are used late at night. Concentration also suffers: fast, constantly changing games can make slower activities such as reading a book or listening in class seem dull, so schoolwork may decline. In addition, time spent alone with a device can reduce opportunities to practise face-to-face conversation, share toys and resolve disagreements, skills that are vital for friendship. A child who once spent afternoons kicking a ball with neighbours may now play only with strangers online.

There are, however, ways to address the issue. Parents can set clear limits, such as no devices at meals or in bedrooms, and can set an example by putting their own phones away. They should also offer attractive alternatives, from family walks to library visits. Schools can play their part by offering more sport and clubs and by teaching pupils how to use technology in a balanced way. Governments, meanwhile, could require game and app makers to include time reminders and to stop features designed to keep children playing, such as endless rewards. Safe parks and affordable activities in poorer areas would also give children somewhere appealing to go.

In conclusion, excessive screen use harms children's health, attention and social development. Because no single group can solve this alone, parents, schools and governments should work together to restore a healthier balance.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
sedentary lifestyleone with little physical movement
screen timehours spent using devices
attention spanhow long one can concentrate
childhood obesityserious overweight in children
parental supervisionadults monitoring children
outdoor playgames and activity outside

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