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Automation and job losses: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu iş hayatıyla ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Increasing automation in factories and offices means that many people are losing their jobs.

What problems does this cause? What measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

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Sorunlar

  • Machines work faster and cheaper
  • Companies cut costs to compete
  • Routine tasks are easily programmed

Çözümler

  • Retraining programmes for displaced workers
  • Education focused on creative and technical skills
  • Support payments during transition

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce automation and job loss
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Problems for workers and communities
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Retraining, education and financial support
  4. 4SonuçConclude with the need for planning

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

Cevabın yalnızca bu sayfada kalır. Sayfadan çıkmadan önce kopyala.

Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (275 kelime)

Automation in factories and offices is causing many people to lose their jobs. This essay will consider the problems that this creates and suggest measures that could help.

The first problem is the immediate hardship for workers. Those who lose their jobs may struggle to find new ones, particularly if they are older or have skills that are specific to one task, and long-term unemployment brings financial stress, loss of confidence and mental health problems. Entire communities that rely on a single factory can decline when it closes, as local shops and services lose customers. At a wider level, as machines replace routine work, the gap between highly skilled, well-paid employees and everyone else may grow, increasing inequality and social tension. In some former industrial regions, this has already led to political discontent.

Governments and companies can take steps to reduce the harm. The most important is retraining: public funding for adult education and apprenticeships would allow workers to move into growing fields such as technology, healthcare and renewable energy. Schools should also prepare young people for a changing labour market by teaching digital skills, creativity and problem-solving, which are harder to automate. Financial support, such as unemployment benefit and help with relocation, can protect families during the transition. Firms that introduce machines could be required to give notice and offer retraining, while governments might encourage new businesses in affected areas through tax incentives.

In conclusion, automation can cause unemployment, social division and the decline of communities, but with planning, training and support, its harmful effects can be limited. Societies that prepare early will benefit from the productivity that technology brings without leaving workers behind.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
redundantno longer needed for a job
retraininglearning new job skills
labour-saving technologymachines that reduce human work
job insecurityfear of losing work
assembly lineproduction line in a factory
social safety netpublic support for those in need

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