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Long hours culture at work: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu iş hayatıyla ilgili two-part essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many companies, employees are expected to work very long hours and take little holiday.

Why do you think this has happened? How can employers and employees address it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Bu pratik sorusunu GoPrep sınav tarzında yazdı. Resmi bir IELTS sorusu değildir.

İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

1. soru için fikirler

  • Competitive pressure and job insecurity
  • Fear of being seen as lazy
  • Technology blurs work and home

2. soru için fikirler

  • Set clear hours and enforce holidays
  • Encourage flexible work
  • Train managers in wellbeing

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce long-hours culture
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Reasons
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions by both sides
  4. 4SonuçConclude with the value of balance

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

Cevabın yalnızca bu sayfada kalır. Sayfadan çıkmadan önce kopyala.

Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (290 kelime)

In many companies, employees are expected to work very long hours and take little holiday. This essay will suggest why this has happened and how employers and employees can address it.

There are several reasons for this culture. Competition between firms is intense in a global economy, and managers often believe that more hours mean more output, even though research shows that productivity falls when people are tired. Advances in technology allow work to follow people home through email and messaging, so the working day never really ends. In some countries or industries, long hours are seen as a sign of commitment, and workers fear that leaving on time or taking leave might harm their promotion chances or even put their job at risk, particularly when jobs are insecure. Understaffing is another factor, since companies that cut costs by employing fewer people expect those who remain to do more.

Both sides can act to improve matters. Employers should measure results rather than hours, set realistic workloads, hire enough staff and encourage employees to take their full holiday entitlement. Managers can set an example by leaving on time, and companies could introduce flexible schedules or shorter weeks to help employees recover. Governments can reinforce this with laws limiting working time. Employees, for their part, can set boundaries by avoiding checking emails outside working hours, communicate honestly with managers about their workload and make use of wellbeing programmes. Unions and professional groups can also negotiate on behalf of staff who feel unable to speak up individually.

In conclusion, long-hours culture results from competition, technology and fear of losing a job, but fairer workloads, sensible management and clear personal limits can improve it. Healthier workers are more productive, so everybody gains from change.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
overtimeextra hours worked
annual leavepaid holiday
work cultureattitudes in a workplace
employee wellbeingworkers' health and happiness
presenteeismstaying at work when unproductive
workplace policycompany rules

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