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Art, music and sport at school: ide esai IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

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Write about the following topic:

Some people think that subjects like art, music and sport are less important in school than maths and science. Others believe they are equally valuable.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Pandangan pertama

  • Maths and science lead to jobs
  • Core skills needed for further study
  • Limited time and money

Pandangan kedua

  • Arts build creativity and confidence
  • Sport promotes health and teamwork
  • Balanced development

Kerangka esai

  1. 1PendahuluanIntroduce both views
  2. 2Paragraf isi 1Priority of core subjects
  3. 3Paragraf isi 2Value of arts and sport
  4. 4KesimpulanConclude with your opinion

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Some people think that art, music and sport are less important in school than mathematics and science, while others believe they are equally valuable. I agree with the second view, although I accept that core academic subjects have special importance.

Those who prioritise maths and science have reasonable arguments. These subjects underpin many well-paid careers in engineering, medicine and technology, and a country that wants a strong economy needs a workforce with these skills. Numeracy and scientific understanding are also needed in everyday life, for managing money or evaluating health advice. As school time is limited, some people feel that it should be devoted to what has the clearest practical return.

However, I believe the creative and physical subjects are equally valuable. Sport improves health, teaches teamwork and discipline, and helps pupils to deal with both winning and losing. With rising rates of childhood obesity, regular physical activity is increasingly important. Art and music develop imagination and emotional expression, and many students who struggle academically find confidence and motivation through them. Studies also suggest that learning an instrument can improve concentration and memory, which supports performance in other subjects. In addition, creativity is highly valued by employers, since new ideas in design, advertising and technology come from people who are trained to think imaginatively. Finally, children have different talents, and a curriculum limited to science and maths ignores those who would excel elsewhere.

A balanced timetable therefore serves pupils best, giving everyone the chance to discover their abilities.

In conclusion, while maths and science are vital, art, music and sport contribute to health, creativity and confidence. I believe all of these subjects deserve to be treated as equally important in schools.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
core subjectsmain subjects like maths
creative subjectsart, music and drama
balanced educationbroad learning
teamworkworking together
extracurricularoutside the main curriculum
holistic developmentall-round growth

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