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Traditions staged for tourists: IELTS essay ideas

Plan this two-part essay about tourism with the ideas and outline below, write it on a 40-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some places, local traditions are changed to entertain tourists. Why does this happen? Is it a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

GoPrep wrote this practice question in the style of the exam. It is not an official IELTS question.

Ideas for both sides

Pick two or three points from one or both columns. You do not need all of them, and your own examples score better than memorised ones.

Ideas for question 1

  • income from performances
  • demand for easy-to-sell culture
  • tourist expectations

Ideas for question 2

  • loss of authenticity
  • commodification of culture
  • residents lose privacy

Essay outline

  1. 1IntroductionIntroduce staged traditions
  2. 2Body paragraph 1Reasons
  3. 3Body paragraph 2Evaluation
  4. 4ConclusionNegative

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Band-8 model answer

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In some places, traditional customs and performances are adapted to entertain visitors. This essay will explain why this happens and discuss whether it is a positive or negative development.

The main reason is financial. Tourists are willing to pay to watch dances, ceremonies and crafts, so communities with few other sources of income have a strong incentive to turn their traditions into shows. Tour companies also demand culture that is easy to sell, so rituals may be shortened, simplified or moved to a more convenient time and place. In addition, visitors often come with expectations shaped by brochures and films, and locals adjust their customs to match what tourists want to see.

I believe this is more negative than positive. The income is welcome, and performances for visitors can encourage younger people to learn dances and songs that might otherwise be forgotten. However, the cost is a loss of authenticity. When a sacred ceremony is performed daily for a paying audience, it may lose its original meaning for the participants and become only a show. This commodification of culture can lead to stereotypes, as outsiders see an artificial version of the community and believe it is real. Residents may also lose privacy, since their festivals and even daily lives are watched and photographed by crowds. Over time, local people may even forget the original forms of their traditions.

The situation can be improved if the community itself decides what to share. Some customs could be presented to tourists in a clearly marked form, while the most important ceremonies are kept private and held at their proper times. Visitors should be informed about the difference.

In conclusion, traditions change for tourists because of money and demand, and although this provides income, it risks damaging authenticity and privacy, so I regard it as largely negative unless communities keep control.

Useful vocabulary

PhraseMeaning
staged authenticitysomething made to look real for tourists
commodifytreat as goods
cultural performanceshow of traditions
tourist attractionplace visitors want to see
cultural identitysense of belonging
cater to touristsprovide what visitors want

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