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Pressure on children to win: IELTS essay ideas

Plan this problem and solution essay about sport with the ideas and outline below, write it on a 40-minute timer, then compare it with a band-8 model answer.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many children are put under heavy pressure to win in sports by their parents and coaches.

What problems does this cause and what solutions can you suggest?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

GoPrep wrote this practice question in the style of the exam. It is not an official IELTS question.

Ideas for both sides

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Problems

  • parents want success for their kids
  • competitive youth leagues
  • scholarship dreams

Solutions

  • emphasise enjoyment and fair play
  • limit competitions for young children
  • train coaches and educate parents

Essay outline

  1. 1IntroductionIntroduce pressure in youth sport
  2. 2Body paragraph 1Causes and effects
  3. 3Body paragraph 2Solutions
  4. 4ConclusionSport should be fun

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Band-8 model answer

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Many young athletes are pushed hard by parents and coaches to win. This essay will discuss the problems this causes and propose some solutions.

Several factors lie behind the pressure. Some parents see a child's success as a chance to achieve what they could not themselves, while competitive youth leagues create an atmosphere in which results matter above all. In countries where sporting scholarships can pay for university, families may regard sport as a route to a better future and demand constant improvement.

The consequences can be harmful. Children under heavy pressure often feel anxious and afraid of failure, and they may stop enjoying a game that was once fun. Many lose interest and give up sport altogether in their teens, which means they lose the health benefits of regular exercise. Intensive training can also cause injuries to growing bodies, and there is a danger that some young athletes will cheat or behave aggressively in order to satisfy adults' expectations. Relationships may suffer if a child feels that a parent's love depends on the result of a match.

There are several ways to reduce the problem. Clubs and schools should emphasise enjoyment, effort and fair play rather than the final score, for example by giving awards for good sportsmanship and improvement. Limiting the number of competitions for young children, and avoiding publishing league tables for them, would reduce the focus on winning. Finally, coaches should be trained to work with children and to understand their development, and parents could be offered guidance, or even asked to sign a code of conduct, about how to support their children without shouting from the sidelines.

In conclusion, excessive pressure damages children's well-being and their love of sport. By putting participation first and educating the adults involved, we can ensure that young people continue to benefit from playing.

Useful vocabulary

PhraseMeaning
performance pressurestress to do well
burnoutexhaustion
fair playhonest behaviour in sport
youth leaguecompetition for children
sportsmanshiprespectful behaviour in games
coaching styleway a trainer works

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