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Some people think that choosing a career in the arts, such as music or painting, is a poor decision. Others believe that following your creative passion is more important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Some people consider a career in the arts, such as music or painting, to be a poor choice, while others think that following your creative passion is more important. I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
Those who warn against artistic careers focus on financial insecurity. Only a small number of artists and musicians become successful, and the majority struggle with irregular income, competition and the lack of benefits such as pensions or paid holidays. Parents often worry that their children will be unable to support themselves, and they argue that it is safer to choose a profession like medicine, law or engineering, where demand is steady and salaries are higher.
On the other hand, supporters of following one's passion say that work occupies most of our adult lives, so doing something we love brings far greater satisfaction than a well-paid but unfulfilling job. Passion encourages dedication and long hours of practice, which are the foundations of success, and the creative industries, including film, design, games and advertising, offer more opportunities than ever before. Artists also enrich society by producing work that inspires and comforts others, and regretting a life of unfulfilled ambition can be painful.
In my opinion, passion should not be ignored, but it needs to be combined with practicality. Young people can pursue creative interests while gaining additional skills, working part-time in a stable job or studying a related subject such as teaching, so that they have security during the early years. If they succeed, they can commit fully.
In conclusion, a career in the arts carries financial risk, but it can bring great fulfilment, and I believe that a balanced and well-prepared approach is wise.
| Phrase | Meaning |
|---|---|
| creative career | job in the arts |
| stable income | steady pay |
| follow your passion | do what you love |
| starving artist | poor artist |
| professional musician | person paid to play music |
| fulfilment | deep satisfaction |
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