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Causes of rising inequality: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu toplumla ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many countries the gap between the richest and the poorest people is getting wider.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Sorunlar

  • wages for low-skilled jobs have stagnated
  • wealth is passed down within families
  • access to quality education is unequal

Çözümler

  • progressive taxation on high earners
  • investment in free education and training
  • higher minimum wages and stronger worker protection

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce the widening gap in income
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes - wages, inheritance, unequal education
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions - taxation, schooling, wage policy
  4. 4SonuçGovernment action on several fronts is needed

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (287 kelime)

In many countries the gap between the richest and the poorest people is growing. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and suggest some solutions.

Several factors explain the trend. Globalisation and technology have increased the rewards for highly skilled workers and business owners, while jobs in manufacturing and routine office work have been moved overseas or automated, leaving low-skilled workers with stagnant wages. Tax systems in some countries also favour the wealthy: large companies and rich individuals can often reduce their payments through loopholes and offshore accounts, while ordinary workers pay tax on every pound they earn. Education is another factor. Children from wealthy families attend better schools and universities, so advantages are passed from one generation to the next, whereas poor children often leave school early. Finally, rising property prices increase the wealth of those who already own homes and push others into expensive rented housing.

Governments can take several steps. A fairer tax system, with higher rates on very large incomes and inheritances and tighter rules against tax avoidance, would raise funds for public services. Investment in good schools in poorer areas, together with scholarships and vocational training, would give young people from disadvantaged backgrounds a real chance to improve their position. A realistic minimum wage and stronger worker rights would help to raise the incomes at the bottom, and affordable housing programmes could reduce the burden of rent. Countries such as Sweden, which combine progressive taxation with strong public education and welfare, have achieved much smaller gaps than many others.

In conclusion, technological change, unequal taxation, uneven education and housing costs have widened the gap between rich and poor. Fairer taxes, better education and decent wages would help to close it.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
income inequalityunfair difference in earnings between groups
wealth gapdifference between rich and poor in what they own
low-skilled jobswork requiring little training
progressive taxtax that rises with income
social mobilityability to move up in society
living standardslevel of comfort people enjoy

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