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Charity vs government help: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu toplumla ilgili discussion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people say that the best way to help poor people is for individuals to give money to charity. Others believe governments should be responsible for this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

Birinci görüş

  • donations reach people quickly
  • personal giving builds social responsibility
  • charities target specific needs

İkinci görüş

  • only governments can fund large-scale programmes
  • taxes are fairer than voluntary giving
  • charities can be unreliable or wasteful

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce the two approaches to helping the poor
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Strengths of individual charity
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Strengths of government action; give opinion
  4. 4SonuçGovernment leads, charity supports

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (272 kelime)

Some people believe that the best way to help the poor is for individuals to give money to charity, while others think governments should be responsible. In my opinion, governments are better placed to tackle poverty, although charity has a valuable supporting role.

Supporters of individual giving argue that charities are flexible and often work directly with those in need. They can respond quickly to emergencies, such as floods or famines, and they frequently reach groups that official programmes overlook, such as the homeless. Donors also feel personally involved and can choose causes they care about, which creates a sense of social responsibility. In addition, people may trust a small organisation more than a large bureaucracy.

However, charity alone cannot solve poverty. Donations are voluntary and unpredictable, so they rise and fall with the economy and public sympathy, and they often favour popular causes such as animals or children, leaving less attractive issues underfunded. Governments, by contrast, collect taxes from the whole population, so they have the resources to provide continuous services such as unemployment benefits, free healthcare and affordable housing. They can also address the underlying causes of poverty through education, minimum wage laws and job creation, something no charity can achieve on a national scale. Countries with strong welfare systems, like Norway, have significantly lower poverty rates than those that rely on voluntary giving.

Ideally, both should cooperate: the state supplies a reliable safety net, and charities fill gaps and provide personal support.

In conclusion, individual donations are helpful, but only governments have the money and authority to reduce poverty systematically, so I believe they should bear the main responsibility.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
charitable donationmoney given to help others
welfare systemstate support for those in need
tackle povertydeal with lack of money
accountableresponsible and open to checking
long-term solutionanswer that works for years
fundprovide money for

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