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Peak season overcrowding: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu turizmle ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In popular destinations, tourists come in huge numbers during a short season, causing crowding and high prices.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

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Sorunlar

  • school holiday timing
  • limited good weather
  • fashionable destinations

Çözümler

  • spread holidays across the year
  • off-season discounts
  • promote lesser-known places

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce peak-season crowding
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçShifting demand

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (279 kelime)

In many popular destinations, huge numbers of tourists arrive within a few weeks, leading to crowding and high prices. This essay will outline the causes and suggest some measures to ease the problem.

The first cause is the timing of holidays. Schools in most countries close at the same time in summer, so families travel together, and many companies also close in August. The second is climate. Good weather is concentrated in a few months, and travellers want to enjoy beaches or mountain scenery when conditions are best. A third factor is fashion. Certain destinations become famous through social media or films and attract crowds, while equally beautiful places nearby remain quiet.

Several measures could help. Governments and schools could spread holidays across the year, for example by staggering school vacations between regions, as is done in France, so that demand is not concentrated in a single period. Hotels, airlines and attractions could offer discounts during the off-season, which would encourage flexible travellers such as retired people and couples without children to visit when it is quieter. Hotels might also promote events outside the main season, such as food festivals, music concerts or hiking weeks, to give visitors a reason to come. Finally, tourism authorities could promote lesser-known places. If advertising focuses on smaller towns, villages and regions with similar attractions, visitors will be distributed more evenly, and these areas will benefit from the extra income while popular places gain relief.

In conclusion, peak-season crowding results from fixed holiday periods, seasonal weather and the popularity of famous destinations. Staggered holidays, off-season incentives and the promotion of alternative places could reduce the pressure and make travel more pleasant and affordable.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
peak seasonbusiest time
off-seasonquiet period
tourist hotspotpopular tourist area
overcrowdedtoo full
price hikesudden increase in prices
lesser-known destinationplace not well known

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