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Only children: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu aileyle ilgili advantages and disadvantages essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays, many couples have only one child.

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Avantajlar

  • parents can give more attention and money
  • more calm household
  • child gets more opportunities

Dezavantajlar

  • no siblings to play with or learn sharing
  • pressure of parents' expectations
  • burden of caring for parents alone later

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce only-child families
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Advantages - resources, attention
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Disadvantages - isolation, pressure, future care
  4. 4SonuçOutcomes depend on upbringing

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (284 kelime)

Nowadays, many couples have only one child. I believe the disadvantages of this trend slightly outweigh the advantages, although much depends on how the child is raised.

There are clear benefits for both the child and the parents. Parents can devote their time, attention and money to one child, providing a good education, a comfortable home and more activities than would be possible with several children. Only children often develop strong language skills and independence, as they spend much time with adults and learn to entertain themselves. The family may also experience less financial strain, and parents with one child can continue working, travel more easily and maintain their own interests, which is attractive in expensive cities.

On the other hand, there are important disadvantages. Children without siblings miss the daily experience of sharing, arguing and making up, which teaches negotiation and cooperation. Without brothers or sisters, they may feel lonely, especially if their parents work long hours, and they may become spoiled, accustomed to being the centre of attention. They also carry the full weight of their parents' expectations, which can be stressful. In later life, an only child has nobody to share the responsibility of caring for ageing parents, and may feel alone when the parents die. At the national level, widespread one-child families lead to an ageing population, as seen in China and South Korea, where the workforce is shrinking.

Parents of only children can reduce these problems by arranging regular contact with cousins and friends, and encouraging team activities at school.

In conclusion, having one child offers financial and educational advantages, but the loss of sibling relationships and the social consequences make me believe that the drawbacks are slightly greater.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
only childchild without brothers or sisters
undivided attentionfull attention from someone
sharing and cooperationgiving and working with others
parental expectationshopes parents have for children
sibling bondspecial connection between brothers and sisters
grow up lonelyhave a lonely childhood

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